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Array ( [sid] => 112875 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hated. [time] => 2006-01-09 23:01:24 [hometext] => just another one of my poems .. plz feel free to comment!!!kind of short. [bodytext] => You added that you hated me and that I got busted.

When I chatted and cheated with someone online.

My days are counted by so many people that doubted me and hated me.

I have drifted off to nowhere land.

I was told that I had flirted and now I am hated and haunted by the past.

I kidded myself that I wouldn't flirt anymore and now I am knotted up inside.

I am lifted up to somewhere in nowhere land.

If we parted would I be stupid by the way I am treated.

You tell me I can not be trusted ,so I have waited and wanted and wasted now I feel stupid.

I feel like a wooded doll , that is wasted and stupid .

Would this ever change ,I think it is going to be worst and would the wounded soul heal I think it is going to be

scattered and hated by so many people.

SO I am saying should we part ,,, There is no trust.

I am nothing THE WAY I GET TREATED MY SOUL IS WOUNDED.

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Hated.

Contributed by butterflygirl40 on Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 11:01:24 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You added that you hated me and that I got busted.

When I chatted and cheated with someone online.

My days are counted by so many people that doubted me and hated me.

I have drifted off to nowhere land.

I was told that I had flirted and now I am hated and haunted by the past.

I kidded myself that I wouldn't flirt anymore and now I am knotted up inside.

I am lifted up to somewhere in nowhere land.

If we parted would I be stupid by the way I am treated.

You tell me I can not be trusted ,so I have waited and wanted and wasted now I feel stupid.

I feel like a wooded doll , that is wasted and stupid .

Would this ever change ,I think it is going to be worst and would the wounded soul heal I think it is going to be

scattered and hated by so many people.

SO I am saying should we part ,,, There is no trust.

I am nothing THE WAY I GET TREATED MY SOUL IS WOUNDED.

Copyright © butterflygirl40 ... [ 2006-01-09 23:01:24]
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Re: Hated. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 11:29:23 PM AEST
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You have really expressed your feelings well, I really felt the pain , and sadness you write about, just remember people make mistakes, and that doesnt make you bad, it is always easy for others to judge us , while they have their own imperctions. I hope your heart feels better and forgive your self

Hugs to you ,

LG

Re: Hated. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 01:32:51 PM AEST
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A very emotional and expressive write to say the least, spoken with true heart as with all your poems, well done . . .

Ben

Re: Hated. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 04:44:34 AM AEST
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A very heartfelt and emotive write. I also agree with what lostgirl03 and Ben said.

I love!!!! this line:
"I am lifted up to somewhere in nowhere land"

If someone hates you it seems it is not worth your tears.

Take care and thanks for sharing.

Tim
:-)

Re: Hated. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 11:51:31 PM AEST
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I highly doubt you were cheating, flirting, you just have this great aura about you. Are you sure you are not an angel. Well, long time ago, lol, the butcher, the baker, the produce man, the mailmail, gas station attendant and the box boy all spoke to me in kindness, several people said I was a flirt, sorry, but some people just come across to others with high spirited souls.. well I never through myself down at their feet, but I did buy some meat, some bread, some vegetables, got my mail, filled the tank with gas and made sure the box boy took my groceries out to my car, and don't squash my bread lol.. be yourself, be nice, appropriate and you have the whole world at your side.. smile away, and sometimes when others blame us for something we did not do, it is they who may be doing some of those things themselves.. Raquel Leah

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