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remembering all the things we'll miss.
Your constant laughter and smiling face,
the memories we held of each little place.
Its hard to believe that your really gone,
theres so many reminders like a stupid song.
Everywhere I turn there is something of you,
to show that our love wasn't always so blue.
My feelings of hurts just torment my heart,
I never believed that we would really part.
It may be forever or just for a while,
but for you I'd do anything just for a smile.
I thought I could forget you and the past,
but unfortunately these dumb feelings last.
I really do love you and believe I always will,
and I'll keep up hope even if its worth nil.
I'll remember you till my dying day,
hoping and praying you'll oneday stay.
My tears of hurt could fill up the ocean,
then I'd be with you in one fluid motion.
If we were together again I'd show you we're right,
It would be love and no need to fight.
I know I was wrong and I take the blame,
and things may never turn out the same.
But if its true love, it will conquer all,
and all of the past will seem so small.
You should look to te future and not to the past,
then for sure you can make it last!
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Remberance

Contributed by cheralex on Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 02:37:07 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

I never thought it would feel like this,
remembering all the things we'll miss.
Your constant laughter and smiling face,
the memories we held of each little place.
Its hard to believe that your really gone,
theres so many reminders like a stupid song.
Everywhere I turn there is something of you,
to show that our love wasn't always so blue.
My feelings of hurts just torment my heart,
I never believed that we would really part.
It may be forever or just for a while,
but for you I'd do anything just for a smile.
I thought I could forget you and the past,
but unfortunately these dumb feelings last.
I really do love you and believe I always will,
and I'll keep up hope even if its worth nil.
I'll remember you till my dying day,
hoping and praying you'll oneday stay.
My tears of hurt could fill up the ocean,
then I'd be with you in one fluid motion.
If we were together again I'd show you we're right,
It would be love and no need to fight.
I know I was wrong and I take the blame,
and things may never turn out the same.
But if its true love, it will conquer all,
and all of the past will seem so small.
You should look to te future and not to the past,
then for sure you can make it last!

Copyright © cheralex ... [ 2006-01-10 02:37:07]
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Re: Remberance (User Rating: 1 )
by jdawg on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 03:31:28 AM AEST
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I have to give you a virtual hug for that one. i love your poem, it flows together so perfect and I can't relate to it all. Thank you so much for posting this and keep up the good work.
J

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