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Array ( [sid] => 113049 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thy Light [time] => 2006-01-12 15:58:05 [hometext] => Not to sure about it. My head exploded and this is what came out. Plz comment. =) [bodytext] => All the way down this
Empty pit, down deeper
Then hell itself
I find Depression
This never ending
Feeling of sadness
This never ending
Feeling of self-hate
This never ending
Fight to want thy light
This cold, black ominous fire
That destroys all.
But from the ashes of Death
Respires new life
So up from the ashes I rise
To seek want is rightfully mine
To finally get want I earned

Thy Light
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Thy Light

Contributed by dalamar on Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 03:58:05 PM in AEST
Topic: insomniac

All the way down this
Empty pit, down deeper
Then hell itself
I find Depression
This never ending
Feeling of sadness
This never ending
Feeling of self-hate
This never ending
Fight to want thy light
This cold, black ominous fire
That destroys all.
But from the ashes of Death
Respires new life
So up from the ashes I rise
To seek want is rightfully mine
To finally get want I earned

Thy Light

Copyright © dalamar ... [ 2006-01-12 15:58:05]
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Re: Thy Light (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 04:41:16 PM AEST
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I understand this...been in the darkness always reaching for the light...have found my way out and hope to stay there

NS

Re: Thy Light (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 05:01:14 PM AEST
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Your poem is remarkable. But,No, No,- Please don't desire to get what you've earned. That's damnation. Insted, desire and seek to get what Christ earned by his crucifiction. You show signs of the work of the Holy Spirit on your heart. You admit "self loathing". Listen to: Job 42:5&6 "I heard about you by the hearing of the ear, but now my eye seeth thee, therefore I abhor myself, and repent in sack cloth and ashes." The publican admitted the same: " Lord have mercy on me - a sinner. Read Isa. 53:1-6. If you have time, read my poem- GOD'S GLORY
May God bless you greatly,
Lionel

Re: Thy Light (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 05:07:41 PM AEST
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a nice write i will keep quiet with my view keep up the good work

Re: Thy Light (User Rating: 1 )
by Jessie53067 on Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 05:04:27 PM AEST
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Wow, I just adore this poem. I mean, I this isn't even my first time reading it and I still just flippn' adore it! (though bible quoter up there is kinda *****n' me off, lol).

I really can't say *what* it is about about this poem that I like so much, it's just everything. I like the repeditiveness of "This never ending" in three of the middle lines....

Great write little' brother, keep up the great work

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