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Array ( [sid] => 113186 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Long Awaited Disaster [time] => 2006-01-15 00:32:26 [hometext] => I wrote this whilst I was going out with the girl I have written so many poems about; the girl I waited a year for and then broke up with after two months. I never finished it but I thought it was worth posting. [bodytext] => Prolonged, the moments
So surreal
Wounds turned to scars
Now hard to heal
Pained hope and waiting
Not in vain
Sprung from sadness
So much to gain

Afraid to falter
Can't believe
Fragile card house
Won't risk to breath
So trepidacious
Can't look back
Though cannot see
Consumed in black [comments] => 3 [counter] => 461 [topic] => 24 [informant] => Jane_Doe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Long Awaited Disaster

Contributed by Jane_Doe on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 12:32:26 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

Prolonged, the moments
So surreal
Wounds turned to scars
Now hard to heal
Pained hope and waiting
Not in vain
Sprung from sadness
So much to gain

Afraid to falter
Can't believe
Fragile card house
Won't risk to breath
So trepidacious
Can't look back
Though cannot see
Consumed in black

Copyright © Jane_Doe ... [ 2006-01-15 00:32:26]
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Re: Long Awaited Disaster (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 01:29:08 AM AEST
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if you have really lost your love, read my poem on "A desire for reunion"and send that to your love. the person will definitely return.i wish you rejoin.
girish.

Re: Long Awaited Disaster (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 02:03:20 AM AEST
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nice poem.

Re: Long Awaited Disaster (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 03:48:57 PM AEST
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A sad heartflet poem penned so well. So little words can say so much. Time heals all wounds. I wish u the best of luck.
*heartfelt hugs*
~sue~

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