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Let My Eyes

Oh my dearest angel
How long has it been?
Seems an eternity since I’ve seen you

I didn’t get to see you today
Not even a glimpse
That would be enough

To inspire me all day
To appease my heart until the evening
When again it will search for you

Tonight I got home too late
Too late to see you once more
Can I make it thru the night?

Right now you are sleeping
Oh that you might awaken only a moment
Allow my heart to whisper “ I love you”

I cannot endure another day
Without the beauty and magic of your eyes
The passion and warmth of your smile

Take my breath away with your beauty
Surprise and excite me as always you do
Let my eyes adore you!

Russ
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Let My Eyes

Contributed by Lone_er on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 11:27:42 PM in AEST
Topic: limericks

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Let My Eyes

Oh my dearest angel
How long has it been?
Seems an eternity since I’ve seen you

I didn’t get to see you today
Not even a glimpse
That would be enough

To inspire me all day
To appease my heart until the evening
When again it will search for you

Tonight I got home too late
Too late to see you once more
Can I make it thru the night?

Right now you are sleeping
Oh that you might awaken only a moment
Allow my heart to whisper “ I love you”

I cannot endure another day
Without the beauty and magic of your eyes
The passion and warmth of your smile

Take my breath away with your beauty
Surprise and excite me as always you do
Let my eyes adore you!

Russ

Copyright Â© Lone_er ... [ 2006-01-16 23:27:42]
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Re: Let My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 11:36:25 PM AEST
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Simply beautifull.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Let My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by slogan on Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 05:19:19 AM AEST
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great write...jh

Re: Let My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 07:22:36 AM AEST
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lovely as always

Shari

Re: Let My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 10:36:02 AM AEST
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Nice write!

Re: Let My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchHoward on Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 03:58:45 PM AEST
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Ain't love grand? Words inspired by love flow very well across the page. The element of impatience adds a nice feeling of tension.
Butch

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