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You're everywhere I go, but totally invisible.
How do I ever feel alone when you're constantly on my side?
You put a damper on my life, but as time goes on, I happen to depend on you.
I fear you, my constant companion. You may someday rule my life.
How did I ever live without you? But how free I'd be if you just let me go...
Hot and firey, but so icey cold.
Wieghtless, but such a burden to drag around.
Rivalry
Envy
Greed
Jealousy. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 496 [topic] => 25 [informant] => drapes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

My Demon

Contributed by drapes on Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 03:53:31 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

My best friend, my worst emeny.
You're everywhere I go, but totally invisible.
How do I ever feel alone when you're constantly on my side?
You put a damper on my life, but as time goes on, I happen to depend on you.
I fear you, my constant companion. You may someday rule my life.
How did I ever live without you? But how free I'd be if you just let me go...
Hot and firey, but so icey cold.
Wieghtless, but such a burden to drag around.
Rivalry
Envy
Greed
Jealousy.

Copyright © drapes ... [ 2006-01-18 15:53:31]
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Re: My Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 04:32:39 PM AEST
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I think everyone feels like this sometimes. great poem you really captured the feeling of personal demons quite well

Re: My Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by Inevitable on Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 04:44:30 PM AEST
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I felt like this once...things didn't turn out that well. Anyway i like it

Re: My Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by UKRaVeN on Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 05:06:57 PM AEST
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i can relate to that

Re: My Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 05:52:32 PM AEST
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great piece! It's a great way to personify the demon
by seemingly talking to it like a person..

"You put a damper on my life, but as time goes on, I happen to depend on you."

very eery and alive
keep it up

Re: My Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by Amanda_Interrupted on Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 06:43:45 PM AEST
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Amen to this..

Re: My Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 07:08:42 PM AEST
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"Wieghtless, but such a burden to drag around."

Oops, sry, spelling error. - Weightless

-Drapes

Re: My Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by poetryfreak13 on Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 10:14:36 PM AEST
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This is a great poem, because it makes no sense, and alot of sense at the same time. :-D Great Poem.

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