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Out of tune the ear drum sees
Music now does fit I claim
But past mistake I must proclaim

Tone deaf let me be to this
With symphony it’s hit or miss
Beautiful keys of black and white
Will shun a lie with hate and smite

But gently finger presses keys
And single note brings calm and ease
A song will form and ring a while
And instrument lies in denial

Hymn of lust will concur it
And build a conscience while it sits
Sing along in this I pray
With music notes that awkward lay

As new a masterpiece was found
Will leave with quickness and a frown
For you have never played before
Or tuning strings within its core

This instrument was played to rough
Previous owner used keys to tough
Although the outside is polished fine
Music notes are off you will find

It wished to sit and gather dust
You came along and played it must
Will give some melody a while
And old to new, a song, a smile.

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a new song

Contributed by boobiepeach on Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 12:57:19 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Put pressure down on clever keys
Out of tune the ear drum sees
Music now does fit I claim
But past mistake I must proclaim

Tone deaf let me be to this
With symphony it’s hit or miss
Beautiful keys of black and white
Will shun a lie with hate and smite

But gently finger presses keys
And single note brings calm and ease
A song will form and ring a while
And instrument lies in denial

Hymn of lust will concur it
And build a conscience while it sits
Sing along in this I pray
With music notes that awkward lay

As new a masterpiece was found
Will leave with quickness and a frown
For you have never played before
Or tuning strings within its core

This instrument was played to rough
Previous owner used keys to tough
Although the outside is polished fine
Music notes are off you will find

It wished to sit and gather dust
You came along and played it must
Will give some melody a while
And old to new, a song, a smile.

Copyright Â© boobiepeach ... [ 2006-01-20 12:57:19]
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Re: a new song (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 04:23:04 PM AEST
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i love the flow and the emontion of this write ty for posting it
r.m.wilder

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