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Array ( [sid] => 113545 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bitter Silence [time] => 2006-01-21 12:59:32 [hometext] => Okay, so just a little explanation.. when I wrote this poem, I imagined it as a young male standing in between a young male and a young female who are both in love with him. He is the only one who can see that they belong with eachother. [bodytext] =>



Incredible, visible to eyes
Just not quite letting pass the 'guise
A bloodstained tear falls to the ground
A single noise/ A single sound
Can you hear me screaming now?
Will you finally see just how
I let go a long time before
She ever said she'd love me more
And he turned 'round, eyes filled with black
She did not try, she just turned back
And I in center, lies galore
Won't you try to hate me more?
I know not of such as true
Only me, and every you
Both people's hearts fight over mine
Though I have not one; not this time
They do not see I have no love
No one below/ Nor one above
I deserve less than fate can give
Deserve not heat, or will to live
I close my eyes, the tears I cry
A wishful glance, but I won't try
They both need eternity
Eachother, yes/ But never me
And so cold, you both feel so
All I need to do is go
And watch the fights remain the violence
Screaming in to bitter silence

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 463 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Vermilion [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Bitter Silence

Contributed by Vermilion on Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 12:59:32 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry







Incredible, visible to eyes
Just not quite letting pass the 'guise
A bloodstained tear falls to the ground
A single noise/ A single sound
Can you hear me screaming now?
Will you finally see just how
I let go a long time before
She ever said she'd love me more
And he turned 'round, eyes filled with black
She did not try, she just turned back
And I in center, lies galore
Won't you try to hate me more?
I know not of such as true
Only me, and every you
Both people's hearts fight over mine
Though I have not one; not this time
They do not see I have no love
No one below/ Nor one above
I deserve less than fate can give
Deserve not heat, or will to live
I close my eyes, the tears I cry
A wishful glance, but I won't try
They both need eternity
Eachother, yes/ But never me
And so cold, you both feel so
All I need to do is go
And watch the fights remain the violence
Screaming in to bitter silence





Copyright © Vermilion ... [ 2006-01-21 12:59:32]
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Re: Bitter Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 02:01:52 PM AEST
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Claps hands, yes, brilliant. Lol. This poem was excellent. I can really relate to it as well. I am kind of in the same situation and it really hurts. Otherwise this was a very good poem and I loved it. Keep it up. *Rose*




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