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your words from a far that's stale and scare bringing hurt so true

this easel that hold's your madness in mind run in colours of ruin

but hidden away with the ghosts that play keep you company in your tomb

cobwebs and dust bridal dress of rust your harlets cave of deceit

hide there all day your pain you display folded as you weep

alone you forseen this nightmare of a dream its presence a scale of black

but the feeling to live and the scares you give shows your life so lack

but in everyday i see you protry a kindness that feeds off lies

in this you showed that the world is just gold spirit is dead with flies

why do you write telling me your fright when dead is all you see

i am alone surviving on my own just want you to leave me
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bridal dress of rust

Contributed by lostrelic on Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 05:52:20 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

a glare from my screen this creeping unseen a evil in my view

your words from a far that's stale and scare bringing hurt so true

this easel that hold's your madness in mind run in colours of ruin

but hidden away with the ghosts that play keep you company in your tomb

cobwebs and dust bridal dress of rust your harlets cave of deceit

hide there all day your pain you display folded as you weep

alone you forseen this nightmare of a dream its presence a scale of black

but the feeling to live and the scares you give shows your life so lack

but in everyday i see you protry a kindness that feeds off lies

in this you showed that the world is just gold spirit is dead with flies

why do you write telling me your fright when dead is all you see

i am alone surviving on my own just want you to leave me

Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2006-01-25 17:52:20]
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Re: bridal dress of rust (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 08:23:46 PM AEST
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A very good write. I understand just how you feel. I've often felt the same way. I can relate to this poem. It is really good. SLipSiX. Keep writing.

Re: bridal dress of rust (User Rating: 1 )
by Lee on Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 08:36:06 PM AEST
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"Lie a little more each day,
Can knot help facing you this way.
I don't have much to say...
You were but their prey...
I was but their prey...
All I can do is fall softly...
Asleep...to sleep...two sleep...two may enter."

Keep it up...
Jolly good show!

Sincerely,
Lee Ferris

Re: bridal dress of rust (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 02:36:24 PM AEST
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quite powerful with between the lines emotional revalations, hiden secrets
provide 4 some stirring about amidst the old skeletons in the proverbial closset, quite captivating reading we have here, well done.

Ben

Re: bridal dress of rust (User Rating: 1 )
by Jessie53067 on Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 03:21:06 PM AEST
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[i]but the feeling to live and the scares you give shows your life so lack

but in everyday i see you protry a kindness that feeds off lies[/i]

These two lines especially explain a lot of what my eyes have been recently opened up to. Someone who I thought was my best friend and knew me better than anyone else in the world betrayed me and my eyes have been opened to things that people around me have always seen. Those two line just really hit me hard.

Overall, I love it. You have a really unique writing style and really like it. Amazing write.

-Jessie

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