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Array ( [sid] => 113880 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => poem 15 [time] => 2006-01-27 21:43:09 [hometext] => this one is about the guy that raped me... [bodytext] => He lays at the feet of evil,
Begging for mercy and forgiveness.
I stand beside this evil,
Sword in hand,
Ready to pay this ***** back for hurting me,
For making me suffer as I have.
I am fully prepared to punish him,
Yet for some reason I can't do it.
I hand over the sword to this evil,
Who understands why I can't punish him.
I see him screaming as he is being beaten,
Whipped and tortured endlessly.
I just stand and watch this happen,
Caring,
Yet not caring.
Now I see him as he would be now.
A rotting corpse.
Flesh falling away.
Maggots and worms crawling all over his dead body,
Eating his decaying body.
And that evil...
It's my demon,
My dark demon.
Me.
This demon has been freed because of my anger.
Anger towards him for hurting me.
He laughs at me from beyond the grave,
As I sit here and cry in this emptiness. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Lady_Ravyn_Bloodstone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

poem 15

Contributed by Lady_Ravyn_Bloodstone on Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 09:43:09 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

He lays at the feet of evil,
Begging for mercy and forgiveness.
I stand beside this evil,
Sword in hand,
Ready to pay this ***** back for hurting me,
For making me suffer as I have.
I am fully prepared to punish him,
Yet for some reason I can't do it.
I hand over the sword to this evil,
Who understands why I can't punish him.
I see him screaming as he is being beaten,
Whipped and tortured endlessly.
I just stand and watch this happen,
Caring,
Yet not caring.
Now I see him as he would be now.
A rotting corpse.
Flesh falling away.
Maggots and worms crawling all over his dead body,
Eating his decaying body.
And that evil...
It's my demon,
My dark demon.
Me.
This demon has been freed because of my anger.
Anger towards him for hurting me.
He laughs at me from beyond the grave,
As I sit here and cry in this emptiness.

Copyright © Lady_Ravyn_Bloodstone ... [ 2006-01-27 21:43:09]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: poem 15 (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 10:00:11 PM AEST
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sad poem i am sorry you went threw this

I hope things get better for you..

sad but nice write on this poem..

Re: poem 15 (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampire_Slander on Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 10:37:29 PM AEST
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Dark just the way I like them, very good write my friend. keep it up! I'm just sad that you had to go through somthing so tragic to write this.

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