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Array ( [sid] => 113885 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thoughts of you and me [time] => 2006-01-27 22:33:35 [hometext] => Written for a man who I will never be able to love...:( [bodytext] => I cannot put my finger on it,
but there is something there,
between the hearts of you and me,
but do you even care?
You try to say it will not work,
my friends all tell me too,
I will not dismiss this feeling,
for my heart longs for you.
I now believe this cannot work,
because we are too close.
I do not want to lose my friend,
then my heart would be broke.
Yet, you and I are such good friends,
I want to ask of you,
to share your feelings of this love,
and what I am to do.
You say that I should let it go,
because we'll never be,
all that I had hoped us to,
although you do love me.
You say that it's because you care,
that you push me away.
You think you are undeserving,
now hear the words I say.
I love you for the man you are,
and what you do to me,
when I am in your loving arms,
I feel a sense of peace.
You make me forget all my fears,
and never want to leave.
so Will you always stay with me,
for our two lives to weave?
I guess this didn't help at all,
for you are still with her.
So from my mind I must cast out,
all thoughts of you and me. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 528 [topic] => 22 [informant] => bburden06 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Thoughts of you and me

Contributed by bburden06 on Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 10:33:35 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I cannot put my finger on it,
but there is something there,
between the hearts of you and me,
but do you even care?
You try to say it will not work,
my friends all tell me too,
I will not dismiss this feeling,
for my heart longs for you.
I now believe this cannot work,
because we are too close.
I do not want to lose my friend,
then my heart would be broke.
Yet, you and I are such good friends,
I want to ask of you,
to share your feelings of this love,
and what I am to do.
You say that I should let it go,
because we'll never be,
all that I had hoped us to,
although you do love me.
You say that it's because you care,
that you push me away.
You think you are undeserving,
now hear the words I say.
I love you for the man you are,
and what you do to me,
when I am in your loving arms,
I feel a sense of peace.
You make me forget all my fears,
and never want to leave.
so Will you always stay with me,
for our two lives to weave?
I guess this didn't help at all,
for you are still with her.
So from my mind I must cast out,
all thoughts of you and me.




Copyright © bburden06 ... [ 2006-01-27 22:33:35]
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Re: Thoughts of you and me (User Rating: 1 )
by hoist1atca on Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 11:49:40 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this write-
It hits close to home-
There are no rules in love-
Only restraints-
A sense of fairness is one-
You may love someone but is it fair to take away someone elses love?
Joe


Re: Thoughts of you and me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 01:29:20 AM AEST
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Love is beautiful, it comes in all forms. Friendship is wonderful. I have a lot of deep love for a lot of people, men in my life, I do love them all, deeper than ever, that type of love is heart love, and I value their friendship, pure gold, and they love me, yet we all have our own lives and lovers as well, we do not step over the line, to break what God has given us, a beautiful friendship. Your poem is touching, gentle, caring, full of love.. raquelLeah


Re: Thoughts of you and me (User Rating: 1 )
by Kellros on Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 03:12:30 PM AEST
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It's more a case of being afraid than not wanting to, worst part is having to give up you have for something you want, if you don't do that you might aswell not even bother... hearts will be broken, but you can't take steps standing still...


Re: Thoughts of you and me (User Rating: 1 )
by from_first_to_last on Monday, 30th January 2006 @ 01:31:48 PM AEST
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OMG i im cryin i luved this soooo much. cause it reminds me of how i feel abotu one of my best friends and i no exactly how u feel cause yeah i luv him sooo much but if i ever lost him as a friend i would be sooo sad.great write

luv skittles




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