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Array ( [sid] => 114008 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Feelings that I hide [time] => 2006-01-30 20:46:47 [hometext] => This is along the same lines except that I finally told him...this is for a different person! [bodytext] => I want, so much, to tell you
The feelings that I hide,
and the only thing that is stopping me,
is something deep inside.
My biggest fear of what I hide,
is that you will not say,
the three little words I've waited for,
and still wait for today.
I think you know a part of this,
but we've only just begun.
I now lie in wait to catch you,
in this web that we have spun.
At first,"just friends" was fine with me,
And that worked for a while.
And then "best friends" was working out,
until our trip to the isles.
When you were with me there,
and we sat under the sunset,
I swore that you were the one,
that makes me, my sorrows, forget.
You've turned my world around,
and you are all I see.
Yet, I wonder if you'll ever,
See that part of me.
I want, so much, to show you,
the feelings deep inside,
but you will never see,
My feelings that I hide!
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The Feelings that I hide

Contributed by bburden06 on Monday, 30th January 2006 @ 08:46:47 PM in AEST
Topic: secrets

I want, so much, to tell you
The feelings that I hide,
and the only thing that is stopping me,
is something deep inside.
My biggest fear of what I hide,
is that you will not say,
the three little words I've waited for,
and still wait for today.
I think you know a part of this,
but we've only just begun.
I now lie in wait to catch you,
in this web that we have spun.
At first,"just friends" was fine with me,
And that worked for a while.
And then "best friends" was working out,
until our trip to the isles.
When you were with me there,
and we sat under the sunset,
I swore that you were the one,
that makes me, my sorrows, forget.
You've turned my world around,
and you are all I see.
Yet, I wonder if you'll ever,
See that part of me.
I want, so much, to show you,
the feelings deep inside,
but you will never see,
My feelings that I hide!

Copyright © bburden06 ... [ 2006-01-30 20:46:47]
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Re: The Feelings that I hide (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 10:05:31 AM AEST
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I love these types of poems. Heart bursting top let out all of the pent up feelings. Give it a chance by letting it out and see where it goes. A leap of faith is not easy, but well worth it if the feelings are returned. Great write...Mike

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