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Array ( [sid] => 114398 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To You My Heart's Story [time] => 2006-02-06 22:15:47 [hometext] => Ya know.... I never thought feeling such as these ones could happen to......me [bodytext] => Up, down and in circles, and back again
It's the emotional ride that never ends
Confusion sometimes feeling like an illision
Because I can't figure out what it is you're doin... to me.
It's real... but then it's too good I got to be dreaming.
Love was something I couldn't believe in,
And for it to be happening to at the mere age of 16
Just seemed a little unreal because you got into my head
By all those pretty things you said, but then
It was more than that...
It became your voice, your smile, your eyes, just eveything about you.
That made me realize love is true,
Because what I felt for you grew but I didn't know if you felt the same way.
And all what I felt for you got lost one day.
A day where truth met my eyes, scarred my mind... and bruised my heart.
I found out you already had someone by your side.
Every emotion corrupted my mind and body leaving me to cry,
Soaking my pillow cases but still then I...
Wanted you next to me in hopes you'd be the cure to dry my eyes
And yes, I admit I wanted to hate you... I tried,
But only hurt myself because it seemed to hurt you.
I could only hate you in my mind,
My heart was still singing, I think I love you.
It was a war within myself that fought so loudly,
And I didn't know what to listen to.
But love took over like a drug and I was the fien...
Needing and wanting you no matter what pain.
It all didn't matter, so that's why I couldn't hate you...
I loved you. That had to be the only reason.
It had to be the only explanation to what I was feeling,
Because after you opened up and showed me your heart
I knew from then my thoughts of you and I would never part...
I haven't gone a day since then without you on my mind.
Never leaving my thoughts or my heart, no matter the place or time.
Like, the moment your lips first met mine.
Times when we talked and your eyes glistened from a single non fallen tear
Which let me know you too... cried.
And like when you first said those three words
That from then opened my eyes to a new world
I have yet to explore, take in, endure.
Those 8 letter have a meaning beyond any definition
And believe it or not, because of you showing me so... you've become my inspiration
to many things...that not even this poem could explain.
But at the end of each day all ups, downs, and circles and back again aside
There is only one thought kept so dearly in my mind
Kept so close and strongly to my heart... that ven if you aren't mine
Even if I am not without, even if I once wanted to hate you
I will always love you.
I'm no longer dwelling amongst confusion... there is now no illusion
I see and feel clearly now, so that's why I'm usin'
These words to create for you a memory
A memory I hope you take with you when you leave me
So, this to you... is my heart's story. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 2 [informant] => artemis03 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
To You My Heart's Story

Contributed by artemis03 on Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 10:15:47 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Up, down and in circles, and back again
It's the emotional ride that never ends
Confusion sometimes feeling like an illision
Because I can't figure out what it is you're doin... to me.
It's real... but then it's too good I got to be dreaming.
Love was something I couldn't believe in,
And for it to be happening to at the mere age of 16
Just seemed a little unreal because you got into my head
By all those pretty things you said, but then
It was more than that...
It became your voice, your smile, your eyes, just eveything about you.
That made me realize love is true,
Because what I felt for you grew but I didn't know if you felt the same way.
And all what I felt for you got lost one day.
A day where truth met my eyes, scarred my mind... and bruised my heart.
I found out you already had someone by your side.
Every emotion corrupted my mind and body leaving me to cry,
Soaking my pillow cases but still then I...
Wanted you next to me in hopes you'd be the cure to dry my eyes
And yes, I admit I wanted to hate you... I tried,
But only hurt myself because it seemed to hurt you.
I could only hate you in my mind,
My heart was still singing, I think I love you.
It was a war within myself that fought so loudly,
And I didn't know what to listen to.
But love took over like a drug and I was the fien...
Needing and wanting you no matter what pain.
It all didn't matter, so that's why I couldn't hate you...
I loved you. That had to be the only reason.
It had to be the only explanation to what I was feeling,
Because after you opened up and showed me your heart
I knew from then my thoughts of you and I would never part...
I haven't gone a day since then without you on my mind.
Never leaving my thoughts or my heart, no matter the place or time.
Like, the moment your lips first met mine.
Times when we talked and your eyes glistened from a single non fallen tear
Which let me know you too... cried.
And like when you first said those three words
That from then opened my eyes to a new world
I have yet to explore, take in, endure.
Those 8 letter have a meaning beyond any definition
And believe it or not, because of you showing me so... you've become my inspiration
to many things...that not even this poem could explain.
But at the end of each day all ups, downs, and circles and back again aside
There is only one thought kept so dearly in my mind
Kept so close and strongly to my heart... that ven if you aren't mine
Even if I am not without, even if I once wanted to hate you
I will always love you.
I'm no longer dwelling amongst confusion... there is now no illusion
I see and feel clearly now, so that's why I'm usin'
These words to create for you a memory
A memory I hope you take with you when you leave me
So, this to you... is my heart's story.




Copyright © artemis03 ... [ 2006-02-06 22:15:47]
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Re: To You My Heart's Story (User Rating: 1 )
by ElevenToedSloth on Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 11:28:12 PM AEST
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I love it, a lot.
Which, in itself says a lot, because I rarely like poems that are so straight forward.
However, I think that you may have accidently had a line infulence?

You:
"because you got into my head
By all those pretty things you said"

"Konstantine", by Something Corporate:
"This is to a girl who got into my my head,
with all the pretty things she said"

God job, though. =]




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