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Array ( [sid] => 114571 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => And so I say Goodbye [time] => 2006-02-09 20:56:24 [hometext] => I think this poem could mean many different things in my life...tho it wasn't inspired by any recent events in my life, it means a lot to me. just wrote it, tell me what you think... [bodytext] => And so I say Goodbye.
A drop, rolling down your cheek.
Choked up, you can't speak.

A wave, as the wheels turn.
It rips and hits as a burn.
Seems like I can never learn.

And so I say Goodbye.
I cry, my body swells.
and we say our final farwells.

You dissapear into the distance.
I feard this, a tear is all I have at this instant.
And so I say Goodbye.

We had a story-worthy bond.
Can it be? Now you're gone.
A final farwell, well all I can say is Goodbye.

When we first embraced, angels flew.
I don't think you'll ever know what you put me thru.
What can I do but Cry?

And so I say Goodbye.

My tears here form a puddle.
We were peices to a picturesque puzzle.
Now getting thru every second is a struggle.

Maybe God has saved,
another time that we'll meet before we die,
and lie in our graves.
Now we pull apart with only a wave
and I cry.

And so I say Goodbye [comments] => 3 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 22 [informant] => moses [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

And so I say Goodbye

Contributed by moses on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 08:56:24 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

And so I say Goodbye.
A drop, rolling down your cheek.
Choked up, you can't speak.

A wave, as the wheels turn.
It rips and hits as a burn.
Seems like I can never learn.

And so I say Goodbye.
I cry, my body swells.
and we say our final farwells.

You dissapear into the distance.
I feard this, a tear is all I have at this instant.
And so I say Goodbye.

We had a story-worthy bond.
Can it be? Now you're gone.
A final farwell, well all I can say is Goodbye.

When we first embraced, angels flew.
I don't think you'll ever know what you put me thru.
What can I do but Cry?

And so I say Goodbye.

My tears here form a puddle.
We were peices to a picturesque puzzle.
Now getting thru every second is a struggle.

Maybe God has saved,
another time that we'll meet before we die,
and lie in our graves.
Now we pull apart with only a wave
and I cry.

And so I say Goodbye

Copyright © moses ... [ 2006-02-09 20:56:24]
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Re: And so I say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by themonk on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 09:49:41 PM AEST
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man call the police! theres a murder. you were uinbelievable, u killed that poem to the face man, Moses, i dunno wat u talkin bout, but u can def put me to retirment any day, keep ur head up and keep that pen downnuckka.

"The Monk"

Re: And so I say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by craigcully on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 10:57:32 PM AEST
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Though it's been a long while since I've been in that situation, this is a good refresher of what it's like. Goodbye can be a powerful word, and you did it justice. Good job.

Re: And so I say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 09:34:45 AM AEST
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I have felt the feeling , when you have a lump in your throat you just can swallow, and it feel like you chest is going to cave in, Very well expressed, and very sad

LG

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