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Array ( [sid] => 114613 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => GETTING AWAY FROM ME [time] => 2006-02-10 20:30:15 [hometext] => when I got realy mad at myself I wrote this, I just hate myself sometimes. [bodytext] => Calling me week, making it true, the one that I hate, that person is you, I look in the mirror, as I wisper my hate,
you are my evil, you are my fate, but realy your nothing, you are what I am, and for what you do, I sure give a damn,
I know you are hatred, but what you may find, is your in my control, my subconcence mind, I am my anger, I am my pain,
I am my sorrow, and I am my shame, you dont control me, your not even real,you dont have emotions, you cant even feel. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 237 [topic] => 63 [informant] => Forgotten_soul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => hbadday )

GETTING AWAY FROM ME

Contributed by Forgotten_soul on Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 08:30:15 PM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

Calling me week, making it true, the one that I hate, that person is you, I look in the mirror, as I wisper my hate,
you are my evil, you are my fate, but realy your nothing, you are what I am, and for what you do, I sure give a damn,
I know you are hatred, but what you may find, is your in my control, my subconcence mind, I am my anger, I am my pain,
I am my sorrow, and I am my shame, you dont control me, your not even real,you dont have emotions, you cant even feel.

Copyright © Forgotten_soul ... [ 2006-02-10 20:30:15]
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Re: GETTING AWAY FROM ME (User Rating: 1 )
by peaceinfear on Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 08:47:48 PM AEST
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wow u no i love it-- it kinda sounds like a short echo of my poem - but when you realize your in control.... etc.. hehe i just got dejavu--sorry giving it a 5 Peace :)

Re: GETTING AWAY FROM ME (User Rating: 1 )
by Strawberry on Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 09:21:31 PM AEST
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Awesome! That's all I can say is awesome. I wsh i could turn my anger into sumthin like that. Sammi Jo

Re: GETTING AWAY FROM ME (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 01:04:49 AM AEST
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I don't visit this end of the page often..
but man..
I ^%$#@ loved this-
It immediately took me back to when I heard
"OZZY" for the first time..and I disected his
lyrics... both solo and with Black Sabbath..
It reminds me ..."of me"

I love it..
ass kickin verse...and worthy of OZZY..no $#@!
...that's sayin' somethin'
and I don't say lightly..

write on..

Billy...aka...Man On High

Re: GETTING AWAY FROM ME (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 08:39:30 AM AEST
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i loved it so much hate for your self.but if you have no emotions how can you hate your self?
wow i liked it alot

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