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Array ( [sid] => 114904 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => CHILD ABUSE [time] => 2006-02-16 09:39:57 [hometext] => this might be what happens to those kids down the street that always have cuts a bruises. [bodytext] => I want to go to sleep
and I never want to wake
because nothing you can give
will relpace what you will take
all the hope I had
you took it all for you
so now I sit here writhing
there is nothing I can do
why do you like hurting me?
it is so very mean
you think that I cause everything
but I am just a teen
and now your beetings made me numb
I cant feel enymore
you said you would stop hitting me
but you have lied before
is there nothing I can do
that will make you see
all these horrid things you have done
things you have done to me?
because now my life is ruined
I will never be
the same
Im stuck with painfull memories
that started with your game. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 268 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Forgotten_soul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

CHILD ABUSE

Contributed by Forgotten_soul on Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 09:39:57 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I want to go to sleep
and I never want to wake
because nothing you can give
will relpace what you will take
all the hope I had
you took it all for you
so now I sit here writhing
there is nothing I can do
why do you like hurting me?
it is so very mean
you think that I cause everything
but I am just a teen
and now your beetings made me numb
I cant feel enymore
you said you would stop hitting me
but you have lied before
is there nothing I can do
that will make you see
all these horrid things you have done
things you have done to me?
because now my life is ruined
I will never be
the same
Im stuck with painfull memories
that started with your game.

Copyright © Forgotten_soul ... [ 2006-02-16 09:39:57]
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Re: CHILD ABUSE (User Rating: 1 )
by dahot1 on Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 10:54:27 AM AEST
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wow...a couple of your poems remind me of what im going threw, their all great poems and i hope others are touched because i sure was.

Re: CHILD ABUSE (User Rating: 1 )
by tinka_belle on Sunday, 30th July 2006 @ 06:08:43 PM AEST
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our sheets are all stained red
when we, the victim, lye there dead
with the game that they do play
inspire us our lives to take

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