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Array ( [sid] => 115072 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Alone [time] => 2006-02-20 02:05:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Alone in the world I hate
Is this luck or is this fate?
The way I feel is so unfair
and it's like the world doesn't even care

They know nothing of pain
and nothing of sorrow
As I begin to go insane
My today turns into another tomorrow

My tears burn my eyes
and hardens my heart
My soul starts to die
and then finally parts [comments] => 6 [counter] => 340 [topic] => 48 [informant] => ShadowFox [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Alone

Contributed by ShadowFox on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 02:05:24 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Alone in the world I hate
Is this luck or is this fate?
The way I feel is so unfair
and it's like the world doesn't even care

They know nothing of pain
and nothing of sorrow
As I begin to go insane
My today turns into another tomorrow

My tears burn my eyes
and hardens my heart
My soul starts to die
and then finally parts




Copyright © ShadowFox ... [ 2006-02-20 02:05:24]
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Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by mrpeanut64 on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 02:13:38 AM AEST
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very emotional, hang in there eventually all pain dims.


Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by frankcube on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 04:27:31 AM AEST
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My tears burn my eyes
and hardens my heart
My soul starts to die
and then finally parts

I really liked how you ended it. Powerful.

Please consider some of my poetry too, if you have time. Thank you.


Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Juggalette_chick666pk on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:42:07 AM AEST
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I know how you feel cause I feel the same. You have probably heard that but I do, I'm here if you need someone to talk to. Great poem!!

-Vicki-


Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 01:26:27 PM AEST
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Be strong.....you have your poems to start with..keep writing...eventually you'll see the loneliness will disappear.
Jenni


Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by VivreAmoureuxMourir on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 04:17:39 PM AEST
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Whoa..this was intense.
I love it.


Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 05:36:16 PM AEST
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This poem is perfect...It'e very true for me too. Hang in there and nice write!
-Drapes




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