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Array ( [sid] => 115211 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => why? when all you want to do is cry [time] => 2006-02-22 15:14:57 [hometext] => love can betray and dont let it be on your part. [bodytext] => Life can be good to you and sometimes it can’t
And when its not you should not plant
Your feet with the first nice guy you meet
Because life is not fare
And sooner or later that man will not care
He will treat you bad
And every night make you mad
People ask you why you’re with him, you say because he use to make me glad
But now he has changed
And your emotions have ranged
Backwards to the father of your children you say u still love him
So don’t think slim
About what to do
With the one that is with you
Now
How can you stay?
With Allan when you want to be away
From hurt and pain
There is nothing to gain
I can see he’s driving you insane
And it’s hurting us to
Watch our mother go through
Something
That was once a fling
It’s not real
We can see it is hard for you to deal
With all of his crap
You need to wrap
Up your love for Jim
And keep it for only him
We see the sparkle in your eye
When you talk about that guy
We see the way you truly feel
Your love for him is oh so real
I don’t see why
You stay with Allan when every night he just makes you want to cry
Go spend the night
Without fright
Cause it’s not right
To be with someone that gives you no fame
All he gives is shame
You say you’re the one to blame
For not having a present picture to frame
Of the one that you love
For Justin, love you Deanna
You need to do
What your heart shares
Because god is the one that pairs
Us together
And you and Allan are just a blur
Do what does occur
To you
Because your being a fool
Following you head and not your heart is not cool
You’re pushing apart
Love from your heart
Cause you don’t want to get hurt again
Cause it would be so hard for you to mend
Once more
But do what is right for
Your life
So you don’t have to deal with strife
But if you still love Jim think of that bond
That Allan coned
You out of
That bond was true love
For Allan is the one to blame
So don’t have shame
Because all he is doing
Is playing games
With your mind
You don’t have much time
Your being to kind
To him, tell him to leave and get out
He may be immature or pout
About
It
Perhaps through a fit
Don’t let him pull you back in
Because he will think that you still love him
In your mind
You might find
It hard to do the right thing, but it needs to be done
So you stop living misery and have fun
With your only and special one
We want you in our future
With Jim and not Mr. make life a blur
We want you to be the one
To take our daughter and son
To the park on Sunday
We want our kids to go swimming with grandma and grandpa in the bay
We don’t want Allan to be that guy
Because we don’t want our kids to go through life thinking happiness is a lie
I pray
That you will spend the rest of your life and day
With the one that makes you feel the way
You could
And should
So do what needs to be done
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why? when all you want to do is cry

Contributed by justinjones on Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 03:14:57 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Life can be good to you and sometimes it can’t
And when its not you should not plant
Your feet with the first nice guy you meet
Because life is not fare
And sooner or later that man will not care
He will treat you bad
And every night make you mad
People ask you why you’re with him, you say because he use to make me glad
But now he has changed
And your emotions have ranged
Backwards to the father of your children you say u still love him
So don’t think slim
About what to do
With the one that is with you
Now
How can you stay?
With Allan when you want to be away
From hurt and pain
There is nothing to gain
I can see he’s driving you insane
And it’s hurting us to
Watch our mother go through
Something
That was once a fling
It’s not real
We can see it is hard for you to deal
With all of his crap
You need to wrap
Up your love for Jim
And keep it for only him
We see the sparkle in your eye
When you talk about that guy
We see the way you truly feel
Your love for him is oh so real
I don’t see why
You stay with Allan when every night he just makes you want to cry
Go spend the night
Without fright
Cause it’s not right
To be with someone that gives you no fame
All he gives is shame
You say you’re the one to blame
For not having a present picture to frame
Of the one that you love
For Justin, love you Deanna
You need to do
What your heart shares
Because god is the one that pairs
Us together
And you and Allan are just a blur
Do what does occur
To you
Because your being a fool
Following you head and not your heart is not cool
You’re pushing apart
Love from your heart
Cause you don’t want to get hurt again
Cause it would be so hard for you to mend
Once more
But do what is right for
Your life
So you don’t have to deal with strife
But if you still love Jim think of that bond
That Allan coned
You out of
That bond was true love
For Allan is the one to blame
So don’t have shame
Because all he is doing
Is playing games
With your mind
You don’t have much time
Your being to kind
To him, tell him to leave and get out
He may be immature or pout
About
It
Perhaps through a fit
Don’t let him pull you back in
Because he will think that you still love him
In your mind
You might find
It hard to do the right thing, but it needs to be done
So you stop living misery and have fun
With your only and special one
We want you in our future
With Jim and not Mr. make life a blur
We want you to be the one
To take our daughter and son
To the park on Sunday
We want our kids to go swimming with grandma and grandpa in the bay
We don’t want Allan to be that guy
Because we don’t want our kids to go through life thinking happiness is a lie
I pray
That you will spend the rest of your life and day
With the one that makes you feel the way
You could
And should
So do what needs to be done




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