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Broken Glass
Contributed by
potpiegrrl
on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 02:33:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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My soul is full of broken glass
The clockwork destroyed
Neer to be repaired
The shards pierce from inside
Molten lava leaking
Between my fingers
Up my throat
Out my eyes
I walk on broken glass
A desolate landscape
The sky a leaden gray
The barren earth
Dotted with landmines
Bottomless pits full of screaming
I reach the river Styx
Naked and unafraid
Kneel down on broken glass
Touch my fingers to its black oily surface
A cool numbness spreads over me
The temptation is too great
An unending forgetfulness
No more anguish
No more terror
No more nightmares
To nonexist
Copyright ©
potpiegrrl
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2006-02-23 14:33:50]
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Re: Broken Glass
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by death_not_be_feared on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 03:08:40 PM AEST
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| Very deep and i can totally relate.Thanks good write |
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Re: Broken Glass
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by eggflipper on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 03:15:40 PM AEST
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| Nicely done. Flows really well. |
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Re: Broken Glass
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by justjasmine on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 05:07:50 PM AEST
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| I like the imagery in this poem, although it is dark, it speaks to me. |
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Re: Broken Glass
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by juliette on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 01:04:36 AM AEST
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I wish I could write when I feel like this but I can't - so some stranger crawls into my head and pens the words that I am meant to read - LOL I so feel this one and it is very well written. Thanks for sharing!
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