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Array ( [sid] => 115300 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Alien Nation [time] => 2006-02-23 22:19:50 [hometext] => class, class, deliberation [bodytext] => The world has been in perpetual warfare,
Since the God's landed here,
Since heaven was promised,
yet all had fallen,
Memories of a homeland forgotten,
Waitring, Waiting, on judgment,
Not from monkey's Darwin,
Conjured from out darkness,
Infinite souls in a perpetual power struggle,
everyone's tricked, minds twist,
Everyone thinks the Greeks invented this,
called logic, thus western civilizatrion is it,
the natural end all,
but for these aliens life goes on,
some call this the work of the devil,
but when your on top of the world,
It's natural to feel a little alienated,
within an alien nation,
yet do not fret and remember we all come from heaven,
all forgetting our original social contract,
blinded by sensual contact,
so blinded by the light, the physical,
and different skin pigmentations, and different perspectives.
that we ignore our true spirtual essence,
waiting, waiting, for signs, to unify,
this alien nation. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 241 [topic] => 8 [informant] => Bsteel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AmericanTragedy )

Alien Nation

Contributed by Bsteel on Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 10:19:50 PM in AEST
Topic: AmericanTragedy

The world has been in perpetual warfare,
Since the God's landed here,
Since heaven was promised,
yet all had fallen,
Memories of a homeland forgotten,
Waitring, Waiting, on judgment,
Not from monkey's Darwin,
Conjured from out darkness,
Infinite souls in a perpetual power struggle,
everyone's tricked, minds twist,
Everyone thinks the Greeks invented this,
called logic, thus western civilizatrion is it,
the natural end all,
but for these aliens life goes on,
some call this the work of the devil,
but when your on top of the world,
It's natural to feel a little alienated,
within an alien nation,
yet do not fret and remember we all come from heaven,
all forgetting our original social contract,
blinded by sensual contact,
so blinded by the light, the physical,
and different skin pigmentations, and different perspectives.
that we ignore our true spirtual essence,
waiting, waiting, for signs, to unify,
this alien nation.

Copyright © Bsteel ... [ 2006-02-23 22:19:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Alien Nation (User Rating: 1 )
by funnyface on Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 11:12:30 PM AEST
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THE BEST SIGN YOU WILL EVER GET IS IN THE BOOK OF REVELATION. WE ARE LIVING IN A WORLD TODAY THAT IS LOOKING FOR SIGNS
WHEN THEY SHOULD BE LOOKING FOR CHRIST.
I'M SURE THAT WHEN RAPTURE TAKES PLACE
EVERYBODY LEFT BEHIND WILL BLAME IT ON THE ALIENS. THAT HAS ALREADY BEEN PROPHESIED. I GUESS WHAT I'M TRYING TO SAY IS JUST BE READY WHEN HE COMES AND YOU WON'T HAVE TO WORRY.

Re: Alien Nation (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 12:33:57 AM AEST
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Very creative, strong write.
good work. U r very artisitic .
huggs,
emy

Re: Alien Nation (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 10:25:19 AM AEST
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WOW!

Enormously powerful. I feel if you had put a little more patience in this, it would have been something of a masterpiece. Even without that patience it captivates a passionate flare, with wisdom well beyond that which the average person uses everyday. A very firey pattern and flow which errupts with each driven word.

I loved it!

- SCM

Re: Alien Nation (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 05:53:08 PM AEST
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strong write

NS

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