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Whether to live or die in this cruel world of lies
No one to trust, she is about to bust
Because of the emotions she hides
Deep, down inside
She starts to cry
Not knowing if she should say goodbye
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Live or Die

Contributed by manders on Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 01:40:46 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

With all her hate, she has to debate
Whether to live or die in this cruel world of lies
No one to trust, she is about to bust
Because of the emotions she hides
Deep, down inside
She starts to cry
Not knowing if she should say goodbye
She looks at the knife and decides to take her own life

Copyright © manders ... [ 2006-02-24 13:40:46]
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Re: Live or Die (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 02:03:42 PM AEST
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well death is always the easiest way out
but the chickens way good write

Re: Live or Die (User Rating: 1 )
by eggflipper on Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 02:45:35 PM AEST
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Short and simple. What more could be said. Often the soul was not meant to be here for a long time. Desolation carries its experiences that are needed to be experienced.

Re: Live or Die (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 11:03:52 PM AEST
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I used to feel that way. Be strong!
-Drapes

Re: Live or Die (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 07:46:02 PM AEST
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damn!this was short and to the point.lots os emotion thow.
humm.
its better not to but i almost did many time.take it from who has been commited to a mental hospital.it might seem worth it but truly its not. very awsome poem

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