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Array ( [sid] => 115472 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ghost In The Wreckage [time] => 2006-02-27 00:06:14 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It's cold and I am all alone
and I wonder
what I should do,
love is a nightmare
that haunts and makes me shudder
raising memories
of a twisted lover
who left me wrecked and ruined.

I don't try to talk
cause I know
no one listens anyway,
I'd like to deny
but I just can not lie
all I feel is damaged and pain.

I wanna
I wanna try to do something
I wanna
I wanna try to do something
but I'm in to much pain...
in the shadows
all alone
silently I am wanting,
I moan
watching the reflection of my image cracking
no need for words
when they mean nothing,
this is my wreckage
can you see my ghost
as I melt
and oh so painfully fade away. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 61 [informant] => secretwind [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Ghost In The Wreckage

Contributed by secretwind on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 12:06:14 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

It's cold and I am all alone
and I wonder
what I should do,
love is a nightmare
that haunts and makes me shudder
raising memories
of a twisted lover
who left me wrecked and ruined.

I don't try to talk
cause I know
no one listens anyway,
I'd like to deny
but I just can not lie
all I feel is damaged and pain.

I wanna
I wanna try to do something
I wanna
I wanna try to do something
but I'm in to much pain...
in the shadows
all alone
silently I am wanting,
I moan
watching the reflection of my image cracking
no need for words
when they mean nothing,
this is my wreckage
can you see my ghost
as I melt
and oh so painfully fade away.

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2006-02-27 00:06:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Ghost In The Wreckage (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 12:32:38 AM AEST
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oooh, i loved the whole vividness of this poem, the whole ghost concept... realy beautiful write.

~natalya

Re: Ghost In The Wreckage (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 10:46:04 AM AEST
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Good write secret.
*~givingin~*

Re: Ghost In The Wreckage (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 09:35:42 AM AEST
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The tittle caught me and the poem kept me reading. like the simplicity of your style.

Ben

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