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Array ( [sid] => 115494 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => something to remember [time] => 2006-02-27 10:13:27 [hometext] => *i felt the need to write...please comment* [bodytext] => all i wanted was something to remember
all i wanted was a feeling of security

darling, you left today... to go far away
to a place where you are and i am not
i did not a get a goodbye kiss
i did not get what i wished

all i wanted was something to remember
all i wanted was a feeling of security

today you left without giving me a letter
without an e-mail telling me how much you love me
or a voicemail that i could listen to over and over

i didnt want a goodbye nor did i get one
but all i wanted was a promise
that this isnt goodbye

but that this is the beginning of a never ending forvever
of us together

all i wanted was something to keep...
something to help me remember
the sense of security
when you tell me we will be together
forever

*this is for my one and only love Nate. we are meant to be. i love him.* [comments] => 4 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 43 [informant] => hearts4pain [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

something to remember

Contributed by hearts4pain on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 10:13:27 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

all i wanted was something to remember
all i wanted was a feeling of security

darling, you left today... to go far away
to a place where you are and i am not
i did not a get a goodbye kiss
i did not get what i wished

all i wanted was something to remember
all i wanted was a feeling of security

today you left without giving me a letter
without an e-mail telling me how much you love me
or a voicemail that i could listen to over and over

i didnt want a goodbye nor did i get one
but all i wanted was a promise
that this isnt goodbye

but that this is the beginning of a never ending forvever
of us together

all i wanted was something to keep...
something to help me remember
the sense of security
when you tell me we will be together
forever

*this is for my one and only love Nate. we are meant to be. i love him.*

Copyright © hearts4pain ... [ 2006-02-27 10:13:27]
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Re: something to remember (User Rating: 1 )
by thesinner on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 11:20:58 AM AEST
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i can relate

Re: something to remember (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 11:26:07 AM AEST
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That is so sad..((((hug)))

Re: something to remember (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 07:24:37 PM AEST
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aww, very touching poem, i really hope it works out for you!

*hugs*,
~natalya

Re: something to remember (User Rating: 1 )
by Kayden on Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 12:12:26 PM AEST
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Very Emotional!!! I love this poem... Great feeling you made me feel, what you feel.. that is what makes this poem Incredible

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