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Array ( [sid] => 115563 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => M&M's Scattered On the Floor [time] => 2006-02-28 10:22:31 [hometext] => My mom thought this was a poem about something completely opposite of what I was really writing about so I guess its just what you make it. A poem most people should be able to relate to some aspect of their life. Please tell me what you think :) [bodytext] => Sweet & Colorful
My first real love
Unforgettable

Holding hands
Soaring to the sky
on a playground swing

Rain clouds come to play
Ghosts of our past
rain upon us

We run
laughing, but tears
mix with rain
and we take shelter

M&M’s–
Hard candy on the outside
like the shell each of us
is trying to melt through
to get to
each other

We want chocolate
but, are we moving
too fast?

Sweet & Colorful
My first real love
Unforgettable
kind of like the
M&M’s we
scattered on the
bedroom floor–
the room we
don’t play in
anymore. . .



~Kortnie~ [comments] => 7 [counter] => 672 [topic] => 25 [informant] => justme03 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
M&M's Scattered On the Floor

Contributed by justme03 on Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 10:22:31 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



Sweet & Colorful
My first real love
Unforgettable

Holding hands
Soaring to the sky
on a playground swing

Rain clouds come to play
Ghosts of our past
rain upon us

We run
laughing, but tears
mix with rain
and we take shelter

M&M’s–
Hard candy on the outside
like the shell each of us
is trying to melt through
to get to
each other

We want chocolate
but, are we moving
too fast?

Sweet & Colorful
My first real love
Unforgettable
kind of like the
M&M’s we
scattered on the
bedroom floor–
the room we
don’t play in
anymore. . .



~Kortnie~




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Re: M&M's Scattered On the Floor (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 10:30:52 AM AEST
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Ohhhhh the love of m@ms. This is a delightful read. Detailed and flowing. Loved how you compared mms to life and living.
Michelle


Re: M&M's Scattered On the Floor (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 12:28:00 PM AEST
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very good poem
good metaphors loved it
keep it up
alex


Re: M&M's Scattered On the Floor (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 04:12:57 PM AEST
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well done


Re: M&M's Scattered On the Floor (User Rating: 1 )
by Somnium on Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 06:29:45 AM AEST
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Sweet poem, love the similes.
Very sentimental
top job!


Re: M&M's Scattered On the Floor (User Rating: 1 )
by jsringo on Sunday, 25th May 2008 @ 12:00:04 PM AEST
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I am wondering if you left the end vague to let the reader imagine about the bedroom whether she is
gone and the writer is alone in the bedroom or that
you both worked your way through the hard shell and making whoopee is now what is taking place in the Bedroom.


Re: M&M's Scattered On the Floor (User Rating: 1 )
by Sheveg on Monday, 28th June 2010 @ 01:35:30 PM AEST
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Interesting. A person could definitely get different ideas about what it means.
Sherry


Re: M&M's Scattered On the Floor (User Rating: 1 )
by allie_07 on Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 07:14:00 PM AEST
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very well done.




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