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[aid] => mick
[title] => Shades
[time] => 2006-03-01 18:55:58
[hometext] => this is my first one after a very long dryspell and i dont know if its really any good, but...
[bodytext] => i love the way the water moves it reminds me of life constantly changing constantly moving around switching places it glistens in certian light moving rapidly and catching the glow like life speeds and shimmers when we marry or eat an especailly good bit of chocolate and then it has those shady spots and dark daring shadows where movement is sparce and slow its like our down and out moments death, divorice, broken hearts then theres the inbetween the vast majority of the water its close to darkness but almost light it moves more rapidly than the dark will never surpass the light it is the intermediate, stuck inbetween between light and dark between life and death moving closer slightly but never truely succseeding to reach those seldom glimpses of the glory of the glistening lit water [comments] => 1 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 21 [informant] => wakegurl77 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
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