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Array ( [sid] => 115667 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Fictional One [time] => 2006-03-01 23:34:16 [hometext] => The Fictional One [bodytext] => The fictional one

We try

We all try

We fight

We all fight

The weaknesses that dont show our shine

The girls that want to be mine, yours and ours

Pick the one with the flowers

Not the ones who are bitter or sour

And maybe a lil bit wild

One thats cool with your style

A little above the mile

The one who will stay longer than a while

If we had to, we'd walk the nile

Maybe live together after a while

Possibly later in life have a child

Thats the kind of girl

The fictional one

Who knows how to get it done

She has her moon and she has her sun

Her darkside

Her lightside

The one who will ride

Who would take you out of sight

Higher than the kites

But back to the light

Where its just right

Where we both sleep calmly at night

Thats the kind of girl

The fictional one

I'd like [comments] => 1 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 14 [informant] => monkded [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )
The Fictional One

Contributed by monkded on Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 11:34:16 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



The fictional one

We try

We all try

We fight

We all fight

The weaknesses that dont show our shine

The girls that want to be mine, yours and ours

Pick the one with the flowers

Not the ones who are bitter or sour

And maybe a lil bit wild

One thats cool with your style

A little above the mile

The one who will stay longer than a while

If we had to, we'd walk the nile

Maybe live together after a while

Possibly later in life have a child

Thats the kind of girl

The fictional one

Who knows how to get it done

She has her moon and she has her sun

Her darkside

Her lightside

The one who will ride

Who would take you out of sight

Higher than the kites

But back to the light

Where its just right

Where we both sleep calmly at night

Thats the kind of girl

The fictional one

I'd like




Copyright © monkded ... [ 2006-03-01 23:34:16]
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Re: The Fictional One (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 07:39:06 AM AEST
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I like this poem. Its really nice.




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