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When I hear your name
It washes over me like a sweet breath of wind
When I see you
Beauty comes to mind
My desire to be with you
Is ever present

You are so sure of yourself
Maybe that is why I like you
When I see your sweet smile
I know everything is going to be alright
I wish I could stay with you forever
And become engulfed in your beautiful fragrance

I feel like I could drown in your eyes
And drown in your lips
When I see you
I see unmitigated perfection
You are my dear friend
Could we be more I ask?

I hold back... you look so fragile
I don't want to crush you like a rose
When you walk into the same room as I
My heart skips a few beats
You mean so much to me
If only you could know...
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Kara (Purity)

Contributed by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 10:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

When I hear your name
It washes over me like a sweet breath of wind
When I see you
Beauty comes to mind
My desire to be with you
Is ever present

You are so sure of yourself
Maybe that is why I like you
When I see your sweet smile
I know everything is going to be alright
I wish I could stay with you forever
And become engulfed in your beautiful fragrance

I feel like I could drown in your eyes
And drown in your lips
When I see you
I see unmitigated perfection
You are my dear friend
Could we be more I ask?

I hold back... you look so fragile
I don't want to crush you like a rose
When you walk into the same room as I
My heart skips a few beats
You mean so much to me
If only you could know...

Copyright © bobotheclown ... [ 2003-01-29 10:20:00]
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Re: Kara (Purity) (User Rating: 1 )
by Dani on Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 11:20:04 AM AEST
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"I feel like I could drown in your eyes
And drown in your lips
When I see you
I see unmitigated perfection"

Oh wow... lucky girl... Be courageous and show this to her, I bet she'd love it, this is beautiful!

~Dani~

Re: Kara (Purity) (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 11:40:01 AM AEST
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very well written..show it to her...good luck

Sharon

Re: Kara (Purity) (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 11:06:12 PM AEST
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Ahhhh Joel this is sooo Beautiful!! I think you have a true flare for love poetry, this is by far your most lovely poem I've ever read, *sigh* plzzzz show her.... it is perfect... wouldn't change one Syllable...
hugs Nessa

"Smit with the love of sacred song." ~Milton~

Re: Kara (Purity) (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 07:17:41 PM AEST
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well..lol...my only comment is keep writing just this way. Hard to get any closer to perfection than this love poem. Hats off to ya for a simply beautiful piece of art. Larry

Re: Kara (Purity) (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 02:05:34 AM AEST
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don't change anything it is beautiful

Re: Kara (Purity) (User Rating: 1 )
by sunflower on Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 07:05:43 AM AEST
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Pretty name and pretty poem; I hope you've let her know of these sweet feelings :)

Re: Kara (Purity) (User Rating: 1 )
by PrincessPage on Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 05:31:08 PM AEST
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I think your poem was beautiful and its a shame that your beloved knows you and yet ...dosent.

Re: Kara (Purity) (User Rating: 1 )
by Somnium on Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 05:53:59 PM AEST
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Reading your poem, i think iv fallen in love with her, you'd better grab her quick before someone else does. Show her this, if her heart doesnt melt ill be suprised!

Re: Kara (Purity) (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Thursday, 3rd September 2020 @ 01:11:45 AM AEST
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Beautiful

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