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There was a man who wished to fly
He kept a twinkle in his eye
To compliment a heart of gold

His hands were strong and calloused rough
From labors hard when times were tough...

It never seemed to be enough
To make his wishful wings unfold




Though disappointments held him down
He wouldn't once present a frown
He'd play the part and act the clown
So proud, this one who dared to dream

Of soaring over mountains heights
Above the clouds and northern lights
To see the rich and heavenly sights
That make the soul and spirit gleam...





But time is doomed to never last
His future slipped into the past
It seemed to all go by so fast
A life held captive to the ground

And at his end of earthly days
He took his leave of mortal ways...


Now on the winds his spirit plays
A melody of sweetest sound



He slipped away on wishful wings
There's no more need for dreaming things
He knows the joy that soaring brings
Above this rolling sea of men

He tipped his hat and waved good bye
As starlight twinkled in his eye
This man who wished that he could fly
Will never have to land again




L. Carling c2006











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Wishful Wings

Contributed by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 10:18:18 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



Once upon a day gone bye
There was a man who wished to fly
He kept a twinkle in his eye
To compliment a heart of gold

His hands were strong and calloused rough
From labors hard when times were tough...

It never seemed to be enough
To make his wishful wings unfold




Though disappointments held him down
He wouldn't once present a frown
He'd play the part and act the clown
So proud, this one who dared to dream

Of soaring over mountains heights
Above the clouds and northern lights
To see the rich and heavenly sights
That make the soul and spirit gleam...





But time is doomed to never last
His future slipped into the past
It seemed to all go by so fast
A life held captive to the ground

And at his end of earthly days
He took his leave of mortal ways...


Now on the winds his spirit plays
A melody of sweetest sound



He slipped away on wishful wings
There's no more need for dreaming things
He knows the joy that soaring brings
Above this rolling sea of men

He tipped his hat and waved good bye
As starlight twinkled in his eye
This man who wished that he could fly
Will never have to land again




L. Carling c2006















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Re: Wishful Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by slogan on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 11:12:48 AM AEST
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great write.. I really like this one.. I wrote something similar last year call "Birdman"...take care...jh


Re: Wishful Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 12:15:31 PM AEST
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I bow to the master....wonderful write

Shari


Re: Wishful Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 12:51:24 PM AEST
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This is absolutely lovely. I believe it has a very wistful tone to it. It made me want to drift into dreamland myself.
Em


Re: Wishful Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 01:14:53 PM AEST
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Great to see one of YPDC's finest at work again!!
Keep them coming.....
Jenni


Re: Wishful Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 01:57:36 PM AEST
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the king of the court is back. My delight to read your words. I miss you Larry I really do.

PS Shari and I want one of your bongo poems soon, you know the ones Im talking about.(( sly grins))

throws rose petals at Larry

Michelle


Re: Wishful Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 02:52:19 PM AEST
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I agree with Jenni, it's been a while since I have read your work, but as always it didn't disappoint, well done, thanks.

The Phantom


Re: Wishful Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 05:47:58 PM AEST
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what a swet poem .i loved this knid of poetry when i was younger,but it really kool.nice job~crazy~


Re: Wishful Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 06:42:12 PM AEST
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I wish I could lay a field of wild white roses at your feet. This is so pertinent to my life right now and brings memories also of the past. This is so reminiscent of my blessed Grandfather, whom I so adored. You are a wordsmith that none can surpass.

Warm hugs,
Rita


Re: Wishful Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 09:31:25 PM AEST
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beautiful write!! I love the flow and the way it unfolds awesome !!

JENNI


Re: Wishful Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 10:16:12 PM AEST
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I Like it!!!
and I especially like the idea of flying after dying...


Re: Wishful Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 11:52:46 PM AEST
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Oh my, Larry. *sigh*
GORGEOUS, my friend. I loved how this piece flows so eloquently from
one stanza to the next and the rhyming is so unique. But the content . . .
oh gosh the content is fabulous! Gloriously presented perfectly.
Wonderful write Larry.

(and when isn't a write of yours wonderful?)

*hugs*
~Breezy


Re: Wishful Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 07:56:19 AM AEST
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Hey Larry :)

not seen you for awhile, and have missed your poems so much :)
This was amazing, you've still got it ;) truly amazing poem!!

hugs
Pix xx


Re: Wishful Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 09:20:41 AM AEST
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Always a pleasure reading your work Larry. I tip my hat to you an this one....Mike


Re: Wishful Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 05:03:06 PM AEST
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Oh, Larry...Your posts always leave me breathless.

You are one of my favorite poets and one of only two people whose writing I never find a flaw in.

It is beautiful, truly.

Wonderful write, my friend.

*hugs*
Phil xxx


Re: Wishful Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 12:36:47 AM AEST
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you gave me wings once....when I felt grounded. This poem reminds me of the day I read that poem. This is brilliant..it has a wonderful, free sound. I'm glad you're here; this is where YOU belong. your poery is truly appreciated here.. (wipes eyes)


Re: Wishful Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 11:07:09 AM AEST
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This is beautiful...This touched my heart..God Bless!




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