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Array ( [sid] => 115770 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You and Me [time] => 2006-03-03 16:27:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Pain, anger, depression
Alone with no questions
None as to why you're here
Dead alone with no fears
Never had something to miss
No love not hug not a kiss
Left alone, no one is there
And no one cares
Never knew what happyness was
Because people only saw your flaws
No one would love you
Because no one wanted to
The tale of your life is sad
Everyone around you is so mad
Are you just here hate
Is this your long awaited fate
What did you do to deserve this?
What could you possiblely have done to be treated like this?
Things are hard I know
But please don't feel like you need to go
For I have come here willing to love you
It can be just us two
Your whole life went by not cared for
But that won't happen anymore
Come with me and I can show you what the world is really like
Happy, fun, carefree, something you will like
Let me be your friend
I'll help your wounds mend
Just let me help you tonight
Togethter we'll be alright [comments] => 2 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 16 [informant] => Moshi_Moshi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

You and Me

Contributed by Moshi_Moshi on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 04:27:56 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

Pain, anger, depression
Alone with no questions
None as to why you're here
Dead alone with no fears
Never had something to miss
No love not hug not a kiss
Left alone, no one is there
And no one cares
Never knew what happyness was
Because people only saw your flaws
No one would love you
Because no one wanted to
The tale of your life is sad
Everyone around you is so mad
Are you just here hate
Is this your long awaited fate
What did you do to deserve this?
What could you possiblely have done to be treated like this?
Things are hard I know
But please don't feel like you need to go
For I have come here willing to love you
It can be just us two
Your whole life went by not cared for
But that won't happen anymore
Come with me and I can show you what the world is really like
Happy, fun, carefree, something you will like
Let me be your friend
I'll help your wounds mend
Just let me help you tonight
Togethter we'll be alright

Copyright © Moshi_Moshi ... [ 2006-03-03 16:27:56]
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Re: You and Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 04:33:53 PM AEST
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that is almost exactly how i feel about someone. great job!

Re: You and Me (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 05:37:41 PM AEST
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i wish it were as simple as a poem .life it seems never to be as simple thow .huh! i loved this its so emotional.fantastic job

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