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Array ( [sid] => 11587 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => On That Day [time] => 2003-01-29 16:00:00 [hometext] => I miss you.

Thats 1 large coke and a slice of chocolate cake u owe me :) [bodytext] => Watch to see if I falter
As I see you before me.
Look into my eyes then
And tell me that I think i'm wrong.
Put your hand on my chest
And tell me my heart doesn't sing your song
Let me put your hand in mine
Then see if I think it doesnt belong.

Watch me as with my speechless mouth
I kiss your lips gently and release from myself tears
As my feelings of love overflow for you
Please ease your fears
My eyes are not wet with regret
But with a feeling i've missed you for years.

Close your eyes as I wrap my arms around you
And I cling to you like a limpet to a stone
Then ask yourself if I'm overwhelmed to see you
Or content to be without you and alone.
Realise as I finally speak that I love you deeply
And never want us to part again for with you I am home.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 2 [informant] => outsider [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

On That Day

Contributed by outsider on Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Watch to see if I falter
As I see you before me.
Look into my eyes then
And tell me that I think i'm wrong.
Put your hand on my chest
And tell me my heart doesn't sing your song
Let me put your hand in mine
Then see if I think it doesnt belong.

Watch me as with my speechless mouth
I kiss your lips gently and release from myself tears
As my feelings of love overflow for you
Please ease your fears
My eyes are not wet with regret
But with a feeling i've missed you for years.

Close your eyes as I wrap my arms around you
And I cling to you like a limpet to a stone
Then ask yourself if I'm overwhelmed to see you
Or content to be without you and alone.
Realise as I finally speak that I love you deeply
And never want us to part again for with you I am home.

Copyright © outsider ... [ 2003-01-29 16:00:00]
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Re: On That Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Dani on Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 06:56:28 PM AEST
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What a heart~felt poem... this is beautiful!

Re: On That Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexygirl on Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 08:05:04 PM AEST
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Such a delightful piece of work.....you can see the images you have created.....and feel the warmth too....I really liked this......Your words captured the moments of love....

Re: On That Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Lovingangel4u on Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 11:24:26 PM AEST
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You know I think this poem is wonderful. Im very excited about that day. :) I love you. xxxxx
Coke and cake will be waiting. :)

Re: On That Day (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 01:04:10 AM AEST
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Beautiful............. love it..

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