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Depression stops me from feeling whole,
I can feel death inching ever near,
I feel the pain and I feel the fear.

My fragile mind begins to break,
As the insanity inside begins to wake,
It swallows me whole like a bitter pill,
I am in its sights and it needs to kill.

I can’t escape the dark corner of my mind,
As the devil and depression always find,
They hunt me down like a hungry pack,
Inflicting on me a blood thirsty attack.

The pain gets too much for me to bear,
As into the devils eyes I stare,
Locked in a trance with the lord of the dark,
And upon my soul he leaves his mark.

My fate is sealed there’s no way out,
Nobodies here to hear my shouts,
I will rot down here no flesh left on bones,
And my heart is the devil’s to call his own.

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As The Walls Close In

Contributed by pixie on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 01:44:05 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

As the walls close in around my soul,
Depression stops me from feeling whole,
I can feel death inching ever near,
I feel the pain and I feel the fear.

My fragile mind begins to break,
As the insanity inside begins to wake,
It swallows me whole like a bitter pill,
I am in its sights and it needs to kill.

I can’t escape the dark corner of my mind,
As the devil and depression always find,
They hunt me down like a hungry pack,
Inflicting on me a blood thirsty attack.

The pain gets too much for me to bear,
As into the devils eyes I stare,
Locked in a trance with the lord of the dark,
And upon my soul he leaves his mark.

My fate is sealed there’s no way out,
Nobodies here to hear my shouts,
I will rot down here no flesh left on bones,
And my heart is the devil’s to call his own.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2006-03-08 13:44:05]
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Re: As The Walls Close In (User Rating: 1 )
by romance_pyro on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 01:59:45 PM AEST
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Awesome poem man. The way i look at it is no one can decide my fate. Fight to live how you want to be.

Re: As The Walls Close In (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 07:06:44 PM AEST
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wow, really amazing write. the imagery of it all...describes it soo write. Loved it.

~natalya

Re: As The Walls Close In (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 11:56:41 AM AEST
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You are really talented and this is an amazing poem. I liked everything about it. It was written so good. that i am at a loss of words.

Take care
christina

Re: As The Walls Close In (User Rating: 1 )
by moses on Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 05:41:29 PM AEST
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flowed well, didnt seem forced, and full of emotion, i loved it. very good job, very impressed.

Keep up the good work,
moses

Re: As The Walls Close In (User Rating: 1 )
by DarkFaerie on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 12:35:21 AM AEST
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Fantastic write again. You have such a way with words.

My fragile mind begins to break,
As the insanity inside begins to wake,

Wow.

Re: As The Walls Close In (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 08:53:49 AM AEST
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Powerful writing once again pix, you excel at this kind of poem..

J

Re: As The Walls Close In (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Saturday, 15th August 2020 @ 08:26:17 PM AEST
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Awesome writing indeed

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