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And the skies are somewhat gray
And there is not a soul around
To lighten up your day

When you are looking for the sun
And all you find is rain
My prayers for you will overrun
And help you stand again

When you need someone who truly cares
Look deep into your soul
And you will find me there
Piecing you together to make you once again whole
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Making You Whole

Contributed by suzy on Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 03:58:29 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

When you are feeling kind of down
And the skies are somewhat gray
And there is not a soul around
To lighten up your day

When you are looking for the sun
And all you find is rain
My prayers for you will overrun
And help you stand again

When you need someone who truly cares
Look deep into your soul
And you will find me there
Piecing you together to make you once again whole

Copyright © suzy ... [ 2002-07-26 15:58:29]
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Re: Making You Whole (User Rating: 1 )
by xFalling_of_Starsx on Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 04:04:31 PM AEST
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Darling poem and a happy read

Re: Making You Whole (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 02:18:23 AM AEST
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Some lovely sentiments here Lasca..
Chrissie x

Re: Making You Whole (User Rating: 1 )
by Sherry_Gail_Heim on Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 07:45:21 AM AEST
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Very nice work Suzy...wonderful to have feelings like this and to be so kind as to care for another.
Take care,
Sherry

Re: Making You Whole (User Rating: 1 )
by Thumbsucker on Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 04:26:11 PM AEST
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Hi there Suzy,

Lovely Lasca. A great sense of caring and love, very gentle.

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Re: Making You Whole (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 05:17:41 AM AEST
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Very inspiring poem here, Lasca....
Jenni

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