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Array ( [sid] => 116353 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => searching threw scars [time] => 2006-03-13 16:33:35 [hometext] => a story of my life in poem have fun in this warped page [bodytext] => In sullen state of discontent i search the page of my missing event
writing my life's tall tale i passed the page of the white vail
never really knowing love i lived each day with lust above
seeing life pass me by not caring if i die
til the day those feeling showed i took a jump out in the road
a bloody mess a solid car i hit the tarmac oh what a scar
i woke up a week away the wanted to lock me that day
i danger to myself they said i am lucky that i am not dead
i wondered why they said it that way dont they know what suicide displays
weeks went passed drug all the way never knowing if the light was day'
freedom came they let me go they said the drugs would make me slow
now two years have passed i took the pills but they didnt last
i am right here looking threw scars wondering why i survived that car [comments] => 2 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 73 [informant] => lostrelic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )
searching threw scars

Contributed by lostrelic on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 04:33:35 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract



In sullen state of discontent i search the page of my missing event
writing my life's tall tale i passed the page of the white vail
never really knowing love i lived each day with lust above
seeing life pass me by not caring if i die
til the day those feeling showed i took a jump out in the road
a bloody mess a solid car i hit the tarmac oh what a scar
i woke up a week away the wanted to lock me that day
i danger to myself they said i am lucky that i am not dead
i wondered why they said it that way dont they know what suicide displays
weeks went passed drug all the way never knowing if the light was day'
freedom came they let me go they said the drugs would make me slow
now two years have passed i took the pills but they didnt last
i am right here looking threw scars wondering why i survived that car




Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2006-03-13 16:33:35]
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Re: searching threw scars (User Rating: 1 )
by thesinner on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 04:50:14 PM AEST
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WOW .Powerful stuff. good write


Re: searching threw scars (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 06:54:40 PM AEST
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whoa. awesome write, scary stuff, talk about irony. but hey, take it as a sign, you were meant to live =D.

~natalya




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