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[aid] => mick
[title] => Please Come Back Dad
[time] => 2006-03-15 14:29:51
[hometext] => Written yesterday, my dad is in intensive care, we are all praying that he comes home soon...
[bodytext] => Please Dad come back,
Without you here our days are black,
Our smiles are a thing of the past,
Over our world a shadows been cast.
You lay there in a deep sleep,
To see you like that makes us weep,
The machines are breathing for you,
If you didn’t wake what would we do?
We miss you just being there,
With you everything we want to share,
You mean the world to us and more,
And this rocked us to out core.
Please come back we miss you so,
We miss your smile, your laugh, your glow,
I’d give anything to have you close by,
I feel too numb to sit and cry.
My heart is hurting as is my world,
Dad, please come back to your little girl,
I pray that you will rest a while,
Then come back to us wearing a smile.
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Please Come Back Dad
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 02:29:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Please Dad come back,
Without you here our days are black,
Our smiles are a thing of the past,
Over our world a shadows been cast.
You lay there in a deep sleep,
To see you like that makes us weep,
The machines are breathing for you,
If you didn’t wake what would we do?
We miss you just being there,
With you everything we want to share,
You mean the world to us and more,
And this rocked us to out core.
Please come back we miss you so,
We miss your smile, your laugh, your glow,
I’d give anything to have you close by,
I feel too numb to sit and cry.
My heart is hurting as is my world,
Dad, please come back to your little girl,
I pray that you will rest a while,
Then come back to us wearing a smile.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2006-03-15 14:29:51]
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Re: Please Come Back Dad
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 02:35:57 PM AEST
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I am so sorry to hear that your dad is in intensive care.. I hope that he stays in there..
take care
christina |
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Re: Please Come Back Dad
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by boobiepeach on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 03:02:15 PM AEST
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ITS GOOD TO GET THESE FEELING OUT
WELL DONE
HOPE HE PULLS THROUGH |
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Re: Please Come Back Dad
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by Castinova on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 03:29:21 PM AEST
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| sry to hear about your dad. hope he comes through alright! |
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Re: Please Come Back Dad
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by Castinova on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 03:29:57 PM AEST
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| sry to hear about your dad. hope he comes through alright! |
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Re: Please Come Back Dad
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 05:34:53 PM AEST
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Oh Pixie...I am so sorry to hear about your Dad... but things have a way of working out for the best...... He will smile with you again.. My thoughts and prayers will be with you both...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Please Come Back Dad
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by Seans_Girl on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 08:10:15 PM AEST
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I hope your dad gets well soon. My prayers are with you and your family at this time.
Natalie |
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Re: Please Come Back Dad
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by Seans_Girl on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 08:10:34 PM AEST
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I hope your dad gets well soon. My prayers are with you and your family at this time.
Natalie |
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Re: Please Come Back Dad
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 12:28:49 PM AEST
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sorry to hear about your dad i will be praying for you.
hugs |
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Re: Please Come Back Dad
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 12:39:08 PM AEST
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Sorry 4 your pain pix and here's wishing your dad a gentle recovery.
((((pixie)))))
Ben |
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Re: Please Come Back Dad
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by DarkFaerie on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 06:31:58 PM AEST
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awww pixie sweetie. my heart goes out to you. I hope everything goes better for you. I lost my father at a young age so i know how you are feeling. Im here for you if you need someone to talk to.
xoxo,
Melanie
ps. powerful deep write. : ) |
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Re: Please Come Back Dad
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 08:50:19 AM AEST
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F**** pix it don't get any better does it?
I wish you all the best I really do.
I know you haven't heard from me for a while but i've been outer space for a bit i.e not with it.
I pray to god things work out for you.
J |
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Re: Please Come Back Dad
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by drewgreeno on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 10:06:02 AM AEST
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| Very powerful piece. |
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