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Array ( [sid] => 116535 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Shadow Cast [time] => 2006-03-16 20:03:19 [hometext] => Version number 4...hope this one is a keeper! :-) [bodytext] => It's beam and breadth of log
Casts a shadow long
That on the ground will fall
And begin His relationship with all

Never will humanity find
A greater moment in time
May we never walk too far or fast
From the path the shadow casts

For His blood has been shed
Although He rises from the dead
The stain on the cross,
His commitment to our loss

A convenant to forgive our sins
So that we might enter in
His love and grace we win
Which continues to conquer sin

And there lies His promise, again
Of love and devotion from Him
Which we signify with feasting and fasting
To celebrate, eternal life with Him everlasting [comments] => 6 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 62 [informant] => Willofree [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => spiritual )

A Shadow Cast

Contributed by Willofree on Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 08:03:19 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

It's beam and breadth of log
Casts a shadow long
That on the ground will fall
And begin His relationship with all

Never will humanity find
A greater moment in time
May we never walk too far or fast
From the path the shadow casts

For His blood has been shed
Although He rises from the dead
The stain on the cross,
His commitment to our loss

A convenant to forgive our sins
So that we might enter in
His love and grace we win
Which continues to conquer sin

And there lies His promise, again
Of love and devotion from Him
Which we signify with feasting and fasting
To celebrate, eternal life with Him everlasting

Copyright © Willofree ... [ 2006-03-16 20:03:19]
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Re: A Shadow Cast (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 10:11:18 PM AEST
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It definitely is, Will...well done!!
Jenni

Re: A Shadow Cast (User Rating: 1 )
by freespirit on Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 10:51:22 PM AEST
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I enjoyed the read well written
God bless freespirt

Re: A Shadow Cast (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 06:43:25 PM AEST
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Pure love ever spoken so gentle. This beautifies my soul, loving every word written as I know He loves how you wrote this poem, bless you for the love you have shown here.

Hugs, raquelLeah

Re: A Shadow Cast (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 02:01:40 PM AEST
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Yup that's a keeper! excellent writing.

J.

Re: A Shadow Cast (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 02:47:47 PM AEST
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Excellent bit of writing Will. Beautifully inspiring!!

I adore the second last stanza.

~Breezy

Re: A Shadow Cast (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 03:19:44 PM AEST
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This is a very good write. In the first stanza it is hard to tell that you are talking about a relationship with God. Your poem as a whole is full of faith.

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