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Still I hide myself from him i just cant bare to see that face
I cry to myself why does he do this why cant he leave me alone
He brings back my fears that weigh on my heart like a burning stone
He has always been there ever since i can remember always lurking close by
He is only there for me to see, no else will believe still my words echo "why"
He has stole my life and every thing i once had leaving me empy and hollow
I have nothing to look forward to because i know he will be waiting yet tomorrow
Nothing I do will send him from me he is my burden of dark despair
He keeps me from loving or starting to feel, he has made my life a nightmare
Still i hope that maybe someday he will leave me but the thought makes me fear
Will someone then have to deal with him, even to me my desires are unclear [comments] => 3 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 13 [informant] => nothingness [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Why

Contributed by nothingness on Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 09:40:04 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



My dreams take me once more to my most feared place
Still I hide myself from him i just cant bare to see that face
I cry to myself why does he do this why cant he leave me alone
He brings back my fears that weigh on my heart like a burning stone
He has always been there ever since i can remember always lurking close by
He is only there for me to see, no else will believe still my words echo "why"
He has stole my life and every thing i once had leaving me empy and hollow
I have nothing to look forward to because i know he will be waiting yet tomorrow
Nothing I do will send him from me he is my burden of dark despair
He keeps me from loving or starting to feel, he has made my life a nightmare
Still i hope that maybe someday he will leave me but the thought makes me fear
Will someone then have to deal with him, even to me my desires are unclear




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Re: Why (User Rating: 1 )
by twick on Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 10:00:16 PM AEST
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I totally relate. I've got this person inside of me that I don't like at all but they are the constant companion keeping me company and I would be more lost without that voice. I really liked this one


Re: Why (User Rating: 1 )
by UnmovedMover on Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 10:03:53 PM AEST
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A very sad concept. I truely hope you can get over "him."


Re: Why (User Rating: 1 )
by whiteleo1984 on Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 09:59:04 PM AEST
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i can really relate to this... very good




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