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Array ( [sid] => 116771 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A long way to go [time] => 2006-03-20 23:03:58 [hometext] => This is crap don't even waste your time [bodytext] => A long way to go.

Already I have been traped seald & scared.
Broken tron beating & saulaughter.
I have risen from hell & seen heaven.
I have wished apon stars & opend the door of suffering.
Yet trough all the paths I have been through.
Each hrut scar & wound.
There is still more to learn unflod
discrovery & be seen.
I welcome lifes advanters both good & bad with open arms.
Wiating for lifes unforggtten paths to chose the next.
For now I wiat for all the doors of opprintny to open at once.

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A long way to go

Contributed by pureheart07 on Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 11:03:58 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

A long way to go.

Already I have been traped seald & scared.
Broken tron beating & saulaughter.
I have risen from hell & seen heaven.
I have wished apon stars & opend the door of suffering.
Yet trough all the paths I have been through.
Each hrut scar & wound.
There is still more to learn unflod
discrovery & be seen.
I welcome lifes advanters both good & bad with open arms.
Wiating for lifes unforggtten paths to chose the next.
For now I wiat for all the doors of opprintny to open at once.

Copyright © pureheart07 ... [ 2006-03-20 23:03:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A long way to go (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 12:45:38 AM AEST
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this is not crap..just try spell check and you will have a brilliant write. oh and...nothing you write could be a waste of time to read..because words are amazing that way..no matter who uses them they can take a blank page and turn it into a masterpeice..

Re: A long way to go (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 01:21:32 PM AEST
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Agreed completely with purple.....Spell ck..I know so well, i am one whos types so fast and then posts...! Was a good flow of words that was given to the readers form the self.~

Brew~

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