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Don’t take my little girl and tell her no lies
Don’t break heart and don’t make her cry
Because her mama watching you’re every move
So don’t even try is because I know you’ll lose
I’ve been down the road and I’ve seen it all
Heard all the promises that’s ever been told
Seen all the smiles and know all the grins
And I’m telling you now you just won’t win
First it’s the drinking than the cheating sets in
And before you know it your in a tail spin
You tell her you love and your heart is true
Then you’re down on you knees singing the blues
So take it from me when I say I know
Because I married one like you a long time ago
So don’t take my girl and tell her no lies
Don’t break her heart and don’t make her cry
This mama is watching your every move
And guess what Johnny you LOOSE

Written By
Dorothy Calvert
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DONT MAKE HER CRY

Contributed by freespirit on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 10:35:18 AM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

Don’t make her Cry

Don’t take my little girl and tell her no lies
Don’t break heart and don’t make her cry
Because her mama watching you’re every move
So don’t even try is because I know you’ll lose
I’ve been down the road and I’ve seen it all
Heard all the promises that’s ever been told
Seen all the smiles and know all the grins
And I’m telling you now you just won’t win
First it’s the drinking than the cheating sets in
And before you know it your in a tail spin
You tell her you love and your heart is true
Then you’re down on you knees singing the blues
So take it from me when I say I know
Because I married one like you a long time ago
So don’t take my girl and tell her no lies
Don’t break her heart and don’t make her cry
This mama is watching your every move
And guess what Johnny you LOOSE

Written By
Dorothy Calvert
Copyrights ©

Copyright Â© freespirit ... [ 2006-03-21 10:35:18]
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Re: DONT MAKE HER CRY (User Rating: 1 )
by Keila on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 11:19:32 AM AEST
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thats great i like it

Re: DONT MAKE HER CRY (User Rating: 1 )
by broken__mirror on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 12:00:01 PM AEST
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Wow thats so beautiful,i love it!

Re: DONT MAKE HER CRY (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 12:48:32 PM AEST
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this made me smile.
"This mama is watching your every move"....
LOL!

Delightful poem.

Re: DONT MAKE HER CRY (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 12:55:34 PM AEST
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Good write, made me smile :)

Re: DONT MAKE HER CRY (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 02:11:46 PM AEST
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Fantastic, Dorothy. More Mommas need to take a stand and protect their daughters from these worthless pieces of crap. Better the daughters get mad than get used and destroyed. Too many parents just don't want to get involved because the kid will get mad. It is your job to protect them and I say "hurrah" for you and parents that do care enough to step in.

Blessings and love,
Rita

Re: DONT MAKE HER CRY (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 03:06:13 PM AEST
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Very good poem Dorothy but I'm not to keen on the last line!!

and guess what Johnny you LOOSE.

Come on you could have called him Bill or Dave anything but Johnny! lol!

all the best.

Johnny.

Re: DONT MAKE HER CRY (User Rating: 1 )
by slowlysinking on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 03:57:20 PM AEST
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Very cute....I will have to remember that one in about 15 years or so when my little girl decides to bring home some dude. lol

Re: DONT MAKE HER CRY (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 08:44:28 PM AEST
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Very good advise my friend. Being a mother with grown children I know what cha mea.
huggs, big smiles,
emy

Re: DONT MAKE HER CRY (User Rating: 1 )
by instant_star16 on Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 06:54:23 AM AEST
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this is one of the best poems ive evr read......I wish my mom would write me something like this. Im 16 so i of course rebel and date the worst guys but my mom always looks out for my heart. And i just wanted to let you know its a wonderful poem.

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