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This is the last poem I write to you,
For this is what you’re going to do,
Set your tail to the wind,
Because my dear you have sinned,
Your not a man but one big snake,
And if you find this hard to take,
It’s only yourself you have to blame,
For two nice girls you’ve told the same,
Declared to both undying love,
That both you love more than above,
You’d think that different words you’d use,
And so right now you stand accused,
Two timing isn’t a nice thing,
Does this have a familiar ring?
You never wanted us to meet,
Probably because you’d lose your seat,
I can’t believe a word you say,
Why it is now I have to pay,
I don’t deserve to have such pain,
Did you really have something to gain?
Nothing you say will mend my heart,
You have totally ripped apart,
Don’t ever think I’d end it all,
I’m too strong and you’re too small,
I’m not as selfish as you think,
And now its over in a blink,
I can’t believe seven years I wasted,
All because something new you tasted,
Ah but now I ask myself,
Is this the first time you’ve come off the shelf,
So many times I've had my doubt,
This isnt not what loves about?
Trust and honesty is a must,
But you can only think of lust,
You have a really bad obsession,
Now you’ve lost your best possession,
I was willing to love forever,
Now this will happen never
Because my love your free to roam,
You have the loneliness, I have a home,
I’m sorry to tell you I won’t move,
For it’s not me with something to prove,
In that mirror take one big gaze,
Maybe you can see through the haze,
Your lies, they come so cool and calm
Loaded up with all their charm
I can’t believe they flow with ease
Saying things you think will please
Don’t you know this isn’t a game?
Us two girls now feel the same
Used, abused and mistreated,
On us both you have cheated,
I feel sorry you’re turned this way
Was this just a slow decay?
Just was there ever an honest word
Or was it always a two-edge sword
I will never trust another man
By myself ill take my stand
Lonely, yes I certainly will be
But better of your lies be free
There’s no one else to blame but you
Now all your lies are finally through
You’re the one with whom you’ll live
For nothing more I can give
I have love you more than life itself
But was that you?...... or someone else


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LAST POEM

Contributed by jonquilcottage on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 06:10:21 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



My Last Poem,


This is the last poem I write to you,
For this is what you’re going to do,
Set your tail to the wind,
Because my dear you have sinned,
Your not a man but one big snake,
And if you find this hard to take,
It’s only yourself you have to blame,
For two nice girls you’ve told the same,
Declared to both undying love,
That both you love more than above,
You’d think that different words you’d use,
And so right now you stand accused,
Two timing isn’t a nice thing,
Does this have a familiar ring?
You never wanted us to meet,
Probably because you’d lose your seat,
I can’t believe a word you say,
Why it is now I have to pay,
I don’t deserve to have such pain,
Did you really have something to gain?
Nothing you say will mend my heart,
You have totally ripped apart,
Don’t ever think I’d end it all,
I’m too strong and you’re too small,
I’m not as selfish as you think,
And now its over in a blink,
I can’t believe seven years I wasted,
All because something new you tasted,
Ah but now I ask myself,
Is this the first time you’ve come off the shelf,
So many times I've had my doubt,
This isnt not what loves about?
Trust and honesty is a must,
But you can only think of lust,
You have a really bad obsession,
Now you’ve lost your best possession,
I was willing to love forever,
Now this will happen never
Because my love your free to roam,
You have the loneliness, I have a home,
I’m sorry to tell you I won’t move,
For it’s not me with something to prove,
In that mirror take one big gaze,
Maybe you can see through the haze,
Your lies, they come so cool and calm
Loaded up with all their charm
I can’t believe they flow with ease
Saying things you think will please
Don’t you know this isn’t a game?
Us two girls now feel the same
Used, abused and mistreated,
On us both you have cheated,
I feel sorry you’re turned this way
Was this just a slow decay?
Just was there ever an honest word
Or was it always a two-edge sword
I will never trust another man
By myself ill take my stand
Lonely, yes I certainly will be
But better of your lies be free
There’s no one else to blame but you
Now all your lies are finally through
You’re the one with whom you’ll live
For nothing more I can give
I have love you more than life itself
But was that you?...... or someone else






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Re: LAST POEM (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 07:20:22 PM AEST
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great poem, sry for your loss, keep writing and good lucking getting over it.

~natalya


Re: LAST POEM (User Rating: 1 )
by Adelle on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 02:28:34 AM AEST
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wow, really, really good- your an excellent writer- filled with so much emotion- im deeply sorry, sincerley, what a jerk he is- i could say more things but it is no longer in me to say awful things that will only hurt me, but boy men can be awful jerks- im so sorry of your deep imbedded hurt- troly, i am- but i am so glad to read that you will go on- that may be tough, but keep it up-
shanna:)


Re: LAST POEM (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 02:15:39 PM AEST
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It's good to let your anger out, what a loser he is. I'll never understand why people lie and cheat, you're def better off without him.
Good vent, move on and keep writing!

Ali


Re: LAST POEM (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 10:08:13 PM AEST
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Sometimes the man is a jerk,sometimes the woman. I was married to a woman for ten years who was cheating.It took me ever so long to get ove the hurt,love and anger.
I hope your days turn brighter in spite of "The Jerk"

Sinned


Re: LAST POEM (User Rating: 1 )
by Azehr on Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 08:27:45 PM AEST
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tis deep, how come ive never seen these poems before? im honoured to have you as a mother.




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