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Array ( [sid] => 116871 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Circle Jerk [time] => 2006-03-22 19:29:25 [hometext] => [bodytext] => An axe to grind
Against the scull
Wool over the eyes

Straw man to beat
Three sheets
To the wind

Butt heads
Train wreck
On tracks of speckled rails

Around the bush
Streams the valley
Silence in the hills

Overall assumptions
Lead to clear expectations
Great limits placed on manageable angels

The apple falls far
From the tree branch
Defensive, taken out of range

Built bridges
Burn rivers
Log jam

Gold toes
High quality
Cotton charged static grows

Tolerance builds up in large
Particles cultivate
Destroyed castle walls

The face of a framed portrait
Painted beauty
Artistic ingenuity

Videotaped excitement
Jump up and down on a bed of feathers
All about being comfortable

On soft rocks rest many heads
To many pots
Spoil the chef
Burned in return for creating a mess



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_____ [comments] => 3 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Mangos [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Circle Jerk

Contributed by Mangos on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 07:29:25 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



An axe to grind
Against the scull
Wool over the eyes

Straw man to beat
Three sheets
To the wind

Butt heads
Train wreck
On tracks of speckled rails

Around the bush
Streams the valley
Silence in the hills

Overall assumptions
Lead to clear expectations
Great limits placed on manageable angels

The apple falls far
From the tree branch
Defensive, taken out of range

Built bridges
Burn rivers
Log jam

Gold toes
High quality
Cotton charged static grows

Tolerance builds up in large
Particles cultivate
Destroyed castle walls

The face of a framed portrait
Painted beauty
Artistic ingenuity

Videotaped excitement
Jump up and down on a bed of feathers
All about being comfortable

On soft rocks rest many heads
To many pots
Spoil the chef
Burned in return for creating a mess



___________
_____




Copyright © Mangos ... [ 2006-03-22 19:29:25]
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Re: Circle Jerk (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 08:20:36 PM AEST
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this was interesting, it had a good rythem and flow to it, which I liked.


Re: Circle Jerk (User Rating: 1 )
by Sena on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 08:25:42 PM AEST
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I liked it...an easy read. =)


Re: Circle Jerk (User Rating: 1 )
by Lucy on Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 10:18:17 PM AEST
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Wow I like this :)
Nice language!

Lucy
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