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Array ( [sid] => 116931 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love Rhymes [time] => 2006-03-23 16:57:47 [hometext] => This ones co-written with Cindy......and im absolutely honoured....shes in bold...the rest is me [bodytext] => In a world so wistfully woven…
A fluttering heart, a magical moment.
Chances taken, wounded fell,
Love finally cast its mystical spell.

Guards let down, arms held open…
Fears aside, lover’s wish is spoken.
With tender kiss, this fate is sealed,
An enchanting world is suddenly revealed.

A deft whisper, gravity defied…
With the softest of touch, the heart just flied’.
Like a dream born of a virgin mind,
A fire felt, returned in kind.

Face to face, eye to eye…
Words not spoken, bodies entwine.
Witness a moment, other n'er see,
Ignites a beginning, that was meant to be.

Tender and precious, a sacred event…
Sensuous souls join, for a gift heavensent.
A bond that is blissful, a promise is kept,
Now with a kiss, sweet lips can be met.

Heaving sighs, life is spent…
Held in a union, sacrosanct.
Ending in heaven, rhythm divine,
Left with love, that could only be mine… [comments] => 5 [counter] => 549 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Mangs [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Love Rhymes

Contributed by Mangs on Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 04:57:47 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

In a world so wistfully woven…
A fluttering heart, a magical moment.
Chances taken, wounded fell,
Love finally cast its mystical spell.

Guards let down, arms held open…
Fears aside, lover’s wish is spoken.
With tender kiss, this fate is sealed,
An enchanting world is suddenly revealed.

A deft whisper, gravity defied…
With the softest of touch, the heart just flied’.
Like a dream born of a virgin mind,
A fire felt, returned in kind.

Face to face, eye to eye…
Words not spoken, bodies entwine.
Witness a moment, other n'er see,
Ignites a beginning, that was meant to be.

Tender and precious, a sacred event…
Sensuous souls join, for a gift heavensent.
A bond that is blissful, a promise is kept,
Now with a kiss, sweet lips can be met.

Heaving sighs, life is spent…
Held in a union, sacrosanct.
Ending in heaven, rhythm divine,
Left with love, that could only be mine…

Copyright Â© Mangs ... [ 2006-03-23 16:57:47]
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Re: Love Rhymes (User Rating: 1 )
by jonquilcottage on Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 05:41:10 PM AEST
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this is definitely a love poem and very beautifully put

Re: Love Rhymes (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 08:26:25 PM AEST
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I think the two of you did a great job writing this. The exotic and passionate side of love fill many hearts with fond memories and longings. 5 stars

Re: Love Rhymes (User Rating: 1 )
by ilovelillbj on Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 11:53:48 AM AEST
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great poem, surprisingly so considering there are 2 poets. well co-ordinated and full of feelings i'm flying high on right now :)
x sarah x

Re: Love Rhymes (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 10:09:02 PM AEST
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I'm having a bit of trouble embracing "flied" in the second line of the third stanza. Not wanting to be off base here, I did check an online dictionary and found that it was willing enough to accept flied as spelled and used correctly here - but, my mind keeps insisting that "flew" is the past tense of fly and that the rhyme here, therefore, seems a bit forced.

Beyond that, I thought this was well executed. Without the bolding, it would be difficult to guess what lines were written by each of you. It 'fits' together quite nicely and paints a rather lovely picture. Nicely done!

Hoping you don't mind the feedback provided in the first paragraph above,
~Snemmy

Re: Love Rhymes (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 10:40:14 AM AEST
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This is amazing, I felt like i was dancing with the words! it left me feeling so amazing... even with my current situation....wow

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