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You told me I was the grandest lady of he land.
We rode on white horses up and down the seashore,
Until the day you were called to war.
My heart wilted like a black rose in the cold snow,
Now i see your grave stone in flanders field next to others row by row.
The sorow.
My heart is now cold,
The last words you told.
Were my finest lady i love you and i will return next year.
My beautiful lady do not shed a tear,
Have no fear.
I will always be with you here.
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I was the grandest of the land.

Contributed by AmandaChartrand on Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 10:53:41 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Holding my hands,
You told me I was the grandest lady of he land.
We rode on white horses up and down the seashore,
Until the day you were called to war.
My heart wilted like a black rose in the cold snow,
Now i see your grave stone in flanders field next to others row by row.
The sorow.
My heart is now cold,
The last words you told.
Were my finest lady i love you and i will return next year.
My beautiful lady do not shed a tear,
Have no fear.
I will always be with you here.

Copyright © AmandaChartrand ... [ 2006-03-24 10:53:41]
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Re: I was the grandest of the land. (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 12:31:45 PM AEST
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so very sad a true story of love. Very realisitc in what is going on right now in our world today
Michelle

Re: I was the grandest of the land. (User Rating: 1 )
by Vermilion on Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 01:37:29 PM AEST
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A wonderful write, a tearful journey. A poem that both rips me apart and puts me back together again, from one word to the next...

Love,
Mili. x

Re: I was the grandest of the land. (User Rating: 1 )
by ReservedHarlot on Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 05:33:38 PM AEST
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You still are the grandest of the land in my eyes.

Re: I was the grandest of the land. (User Rating: 1 )
by AmandaChartrand on Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 07:38:54 PM AEST
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Thanx you guys for all the nice comments! I am happy you enjoyed it!

Re: I was the grandest of the land. (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 04:20:28 PM AEST
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So sorry for your loss. Just know he is going to be ALWAYS in your heart.! He loved you and went to fight for you, and all.! That was the greatest theing he could of done.! Try and know he will hold your heart, forever,

Brew~

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