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Array ( [sid] => 11702 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => cuts on my legs [time] => 2003-01-31 13:00:00 [hometext] => ok this is inspired by the cuts on my legs that i inflicted this morning. it is so scary, my parents are on suicide patrol when i hav a bath to make sure i dont have a razor with me, it takes an act of parliament for me to be able to use one, and all the aspirin has been hidden... i dont regret the cutting, or the suicide attempts though... weird.... [bodytext] => the lines are ending, getting thin.
again, the razor enters in.
my legs are covered in abstract art,
the painter's brush was long and sharp.
a melancholy sketch of me-
the hidden canvas noone can see.

please end this painting, and this pain
don't retouch my wounds again.
with blood as paint, with sweat and tears,
painting my despair and fears.

please burn this painting, destroy all evidence
of this little incidence
that i call life, and in my death,
glaze my eyes with depression's cold breath. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 331 [topic] => 36 [informant] => ashleigh4 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

cuts on my legs

Contributed by ashleigh4 on Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

the lines are ending, getting thin.
again, the razor enters in.
my legs are covered in abstract art,
the painter's brush was long and sharp.
a melancholy sketch of me-
the hidden canvas noone can see.

please end this painting, and this pain
don't retouch my wounds again.
with blood as paint, with sweat and tears,
painting my despair and fears.

please burn this painting, destroy all evidence
of this little incidence
that i call life, and in my death,
glaze my eyes with depression's cold breath.

Copyright © ashleigh4 ... [ 2003-01-31 13:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: cuts on my legs (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 03:51:14 PM AEST
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You express your inner self quite well here, you wrote it well. Maybe you can put your pain down on paper more than on your body, writting has helped me from a lot of pain. Check out my work.

Re: cuts on my legs (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 07:15:07 PM AEST
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Wow... Ashleigh this was simply brilliant. All this was so well thought out. I loved it. I know its hard but try not to cut. Keep on writing like this and never stop.

Your friend,
Joel

Re: cuts on my legs (User Rating: 1 )
by SpreadYourWings on Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 11:04:11 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem Ashleigh. Keep up the good work

Re: cuts on my legs (User Rating: 1 )
by Patterz on Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 10:36:22 AM AEST
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another brilliant poem...(applause)

Re: cuts on my legs (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 03:34:20 PM AEST
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wow, this is amazing, the best poem i've read in a few days.. beautiful..
x_x_x

Re: cuts on my legs (User Rating: 1 )
by Pompous on Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 08:11:03 AM AEST
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well I'm new here...and I came across this poem and I just wanted to say your a great writer...there are only so many poems that pull you in and this is one of them. Well done.

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