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Array ( [sid] => 117057 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It Never Stops! Part 2 [time] => 2006-03-25 19:51:41 [hometext] => aftermath of my first just made it up while thinkin about my week please leave a good comment [bodytext] => This week was just the same
as any other one
and I still hope that
their guilt will weigh a ton

But the tormenting has changed
it seems that it has spread
so easily to friends and family
like jelly over bread

I never did quite think
that it would stretch out to my friends
but now they do it too
and don't act like it will end

And it even has come from my siblings with ease
but they dont really care
they say that they are just jokin
but I don't think it's fair

My life is really hard
I can't go through it with ease
with all of this pushing, and shoving,
name calling, and tease

If you think I should just cool down
and just ignore the ones that will pay
then shut your fricken mouth
and try to be me for a day

These things I say can be harsh
I try not to be that way
I'm sorry it's hard to resist
those things the jerks say

Well if you really want me to
I guess that I'll try
just to stop and ignore them
just to imaginatively hear them cry

You people say that if I just
try and succeed to ignore them
that they will stop all the tormenting
well why don't you go ***** them

Don't even try to tell me it's easy
to ignore them and not even say a word
well I am daring you to try it
cause they'll all just give ya the bird

Well I guess that's all I can say
for this very moment
because I could write thirty verses
about all the future torment








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It Never Stops! Part 2

Contributed by flyineagle on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 07:51:41 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



This week was just the same
as any other one
and I still hope that
their guilt will weigh a ton

But the tormenting has changed
it seems that it has spread
so easily to friends and family
like jelly over bread

I never did quite think
that it would stretch out to my friends
but now they do it too
and don't act like it will end

And it even has come from my siblings with ease
but they dont really care
they say that they are just jokin
but I don't think it's fair

My life is really hard
I can't go through it with ease
with all of this pushing, and shoving,
name calling, and tease

If you think I should just cool down
and just ignore the ones that will pay
then shut your fricken mouth
and try to be me for a day

These things I say can be harsh
I try not to be that way
I'm sorry it's hard to resist
those things the jerks say

Well if you really want me to
I guess that I'll try
just to stop and ignore them
just to imaginatively hear them cry

You people say that if I just
try and succeed to ignore them
that they will stop all the tormenting
well why don't you go ***** them

Don't even try to tell me it's easy
to ignore them and not even say a word
well I am daring you to try it
cause they'll all just give ya the bird

Well I guess that's all I can say
for this very moment
because I could write thirty verses
about all the future torment












Copyright © flyineagle ... [ 2006-03-25 19:51:41]
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Re: It Never Stops! Part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 09:29:44 PM AEST
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i like it! i like the way it rhymes...and how it's almost humorous...yet serious...i dunno. hard to explain.

great write

- Bethani -




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