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Owls to Athens
Contributed by
Jyssvw
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Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 10:14:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Keep very steady
Dont rock the boat
Shift your weight
Breathe from the inside of your throat
Deep in the bowels
Of the soggy lagoon
A cave lay hidden
Buried by the silence in bloom
This will be your new home
Far from civilization
Amongst only trees and vegetation
A biosphere
Dependant on procreation
Enter here
Or take your chances in the open
The entrance is cloaked
By three pillars of contiguous smoke
Raising the skin from under your coat
Whisper the code-
And the mechanism loads
The locks unravel
And the doorway is exposed
Take a step inside
Pitch blackness decimated by a glowing torch
The staircase point downwards
Towards the center of its soul
Deeper and deeper you walk
Under the ocean
The weight of the world is felt
Towards no end
Deeper and deeper
You walk
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Re: Owls to Athens
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by slogan on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 10:57:27 PM AEST
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| great write...jh |
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Re: Owls to Athens
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by emystar on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 02:01:11 AM AEST
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Very deep, creative write.
I luv it in the woods.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Owls to Athens
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Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 07:21:20 AM AEST
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Fantastic Fantasy
Fresh vegetation and rain.. hmmn |
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Re: Owls to Athens
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 01:22:42 AM AEST
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| Intriguing title and a wonderful poem! |
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