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the thing everyone needs,
the longing for something more
and a broken heart that bleeds..
this is all that i see in your eyes
passion and caring no lies.
lying in my bed deaming of my love for you
and one that will forever be true

the thing i need the most in my life
the days that fade and go by
the nights i long to be your wife
but to scared to ask for love to try
this is my secret i may never tell
a secret i feel i must keep
for i am truely in hell
and tonight i miss u and weep
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my pain

Contributed by brokenwings on Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 02:38:58 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

the one thing everyone searchs for,
the thing everyone needs,
the longing for something more
and a broken heart that bleeds..
this is all that i see in your eyes
passion and caring no lies.
lying in my bed deaming of my love for you
and one that will forever be true

the thing i need the most in my life
the days that fade and go by
the nights i long to be your wife
but to scared to ask for love to try
this is my secret i may never tell
a secret i feel i must keep
for i am truely in hell
and tonight i miss u and weep

Copyright © brokenwings ... [ 2006-03-26 02:38:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: my pain (User Rating: 1 )
by chanceof_promise on Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 02:59:43 AM AEST
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i know excatlly what you are saying..
im going threw it too

Re: my pain (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 01:29:24 PM AEST
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I feel your pain. Let your thoughts go and go for what you want and need. You wont be happy if you dont try.
Michelle

Re: my pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 03:44:39 PM AEST
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A writting of " Par Excellance " your style and your sincerity are of the upmost of what true poetry should be. I do not read your poetry as much as i experience it. It's always a pleasure 2 comment on your writting, second only 2 reading it.

Ben

Re: my pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 10:00:28 AM AEST
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That was really sad, but from your sadness you have produced a great poem.

J.

Re: my pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 01:19:33 AM AEST
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This is deep, I think I can relate to this. Thank you for posting this.

Take care.

Scott

Re: my pain (User Rating: 1 )
by no_1nos_me on Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 03:37:27 PM AEST
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Too true I feel for you

Re: my pain (User Rating: 1 )
by broken_cookie on Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 05:40:44 PM AEST
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this i like alot becuz it reminds me of exactly what im going thru right now. all ur poems are amazing and emotional and i really like them.byes!

Re: my pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Petals_and_Tears on Friday, 20th February 2009 @ 11:19:18 AM AEST
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Such true words. *sigh* Everyone wants someone and few actually have who they want. Im going through the same. Its heart-breaking and heart-wrenching pain to go through each and every day. I dont know how I do but all I can say to you is keep on going. Something good will come of it , just have hope because in the end thats all you have to keep on going is the mere light at the end of the tunnel just hope that it isnt an oncoming train.
Keep hope.

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