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Array ( [sid] => 117169 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => BLEEDING HEART [time] => 2006-03-27 18:11:15 [hometext] => I WROTE THN IN PSYCHOLOGY WHILE I WAS BORED [bodytext] => BLOOD DRIPPS DOWN MY ARM
THE RAZOR DROPPS TO MY FEET

SO I KEEP ON CUTTING
JUST TO FILL MY NEEDS

THE ROOM STARTS TO SPIN
MY EYES ARE IN A HAZE

I CUT MYSELF SO MUCH
I CAN'T REMEBER MY NAME

I START TO SEE A BRIGHT LIGHT
HEAVEN IS CALLING MY NAME

THE DEVIL IS STEALING MY SOUL
I FEEL THE BLOOD DROWING MY BRAIN

MY LIFE IS COMEING TO AN END
AND THE WORLD IS TO BLAME [comments] => 5 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Tiffyo4 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

BLEEDING HEART

Contributed by Tiffyo4 on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 06:11:15 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

BLOOD DRIPPS DOWN MY ARM
THE RAZOR DROPPS TO MY FEET

SO I KEEP ON CUTTING
JUST TO FILL MY NEEDS

THE ROOM STARTS TO SPIN
MY EYES ARE IN A HAZE

I CUT MYSELF SO MUCH
I CAN'T REMEBER MY NAME

I START TO SEE A BRIGHT LIGHT
HEAVEN IS CALLING MY NAME

THE DEVIL IS STEALING MY SOUL
I FEEL THE BLOOD DROWING MY BRAIN

MY LIFE IS COMEING TO AN END
AND THE WORLD IS TO BLAME

Copyright © Tiffyo4 ... [ 2006-03-27 18:11:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: BLEEDING HEART (User Rating: 1 )
by MyNameIsJonas on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 07:10:59 PM AEST
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Cutting horizontally wont kill you.
If thats what your doing

Re: BLEEDING HEART (User Rating: 1 )
by no_1nos_me on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 07:27:33 PM AEST
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your is great and slap the ***** out of the dude who commented before me

Re: BLEEDING HEART (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 10:03:34 PM AEST
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sorry but in my opinion the poem sucked. there is no imagery and has the depth of a puddle. my advice? don't write about things it seems as though you know nothing about.

Re: BLEEDING HEART (User Rating: 1 )
by Serendippitty on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 10:43:55 PM AEST
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its a sad poem... im not a very dark person so its not my cup of tea but its pretty good and its good for one you just wrote in school when you're bored

Re: BLEEDING HEART (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 11:42:07 AM AEST
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This poem was okay but nothing all that special.. but i liked it

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