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Array ( [sid] => 117176 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When My Forever Ends [time] => 2006-03-27 19:54:27 [hometext] => A short little poem of basically the same thing I've been writing over and over again. I have got to get different inspiration. [bodytext] => No one should have to feel this way,
A bitter feeling of love and loss,
A coffin that now holds my heart,
To have him back, I wouldn’t care the cost,

This day is far too surreal for living,
A love like yours can never be topped,
Cold and pale among a crowd of black,
The tears, I fear, will never be stopped,

Cry away the day, a liquid love,
Thought we would be together forever,
I hope you the best wherever you are,
Death is the most epic endeavor,

A grieving gravestone with your name,
A frostbitten wind, no comfort it lends,
My numb mind can think only one thing,
This is the day when my forever ends. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 75 [informant] => crimson_regret420 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
When My Forever Ends

Contributed by crimson_regret420 on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 07:54:27 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished



No one should have to feel this way,
A bitter feeling of love and loss,
A coffin that now holds my heart,
To have him back, I wouldn’t care the cost,

This day is far too surreal for living,
A love like yours can never be topped,
Cold and pale among a crowd of black,
The tears, I fear, will never be stopped,

Cry away the day, a liquid love,
Thought we would be together forever,
I hope you the best wherever you are,
Death is the most epic endeavor,

A grieving gravestone with your name,
A frostbitten wind, no comfort it lends,
My numb mind can think only one thing,
This is the day when my forever ends.



Copyright © crimson_regret420 ... [ 2006-03-27 19:54:27]
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Re: When My Forever Ends (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 07:58:54 PM AEST
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Short and to the point that holds alot of emotion. Its hard to find inspiration from something else when all you feel is pain and loss of the one you love. I know how you feel for i am going through the same thoughts and emotions. Hope that everything works out for you.


Re: When My Forever Ends (User Rating: 1 )
by NoLessons on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 10:52:37 PM AEST
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Powerful


Re: When My Forever Ends (User Rating: 1 )
by Serendippitty on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 11:03:27 PM AEST
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nice write... i feel the emotion


Re: When My Forever Ends (User Rating: 1 )
by needs_change on Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 12:21:49 AM AEST
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WOW!! i really really like this poem. it gets the point across great. it really hits home...
awsome awsome wright...
keep up the good work!


Re: When My Forever Ends (User Rating: 1 )
by Aeris030388 on Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 05:58:14 AM AEST
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This really touched me and put me in mind of the love I lost. Thank you.


Re: When My Forever Ends (User Rating: 1 )
by aegurly on Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 12:29:46 AM AEST
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So great i'm goin' through the same thing i loved it check mine out

"I Miss You"

aegurly


Re: When My Forever Ends (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiffyo4 on Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 01:10:29 PM AEST
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very good short and to the point

Tiff




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