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Array ( [sid] => 117177 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Apartment 1B [time] => 2006-03-27 19:59:36 [hometext] => This is about a time in my life, and the people in it. [bodytext] => Memories of free-thinking and clouds of smoke

Memories of plastic dreams...pointed needles

Memories bottled up into a rubberbanded syringe

Memories of Apartment 1b.

Remeber the nights of countless happenings

With friendly fiends...happy smiles

Dialated eyes and whimsical lines

All an track to no where in our minds

On the floor of Apartment 1b.

Remeber the Sex and all its demise

With fierce words....supressed cries

False love and lustful eyes

Around a whirlpool of self-taught lies

In the back room of Apartment 1b.

Recall the stories each one of us told

Of broken homes.....loneliness

Dreams of gold and the broken hearts of many

And the lies of the greatest Liars I have known

That echo in the walls of Apartment 1b.


REMEBER IT.....We lived it.....we breathed it....IT MADE US!!!


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Apartment 1B

Contributed by Perky on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 07:59:36 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse



Memories of free-thinking and clouds of smoke

Memories of plastic dreams...pointed needles

Memories bottled up into a rubberbanded syringe

Memories of Apartment 1b.

Remeber the nights of countless happenings

With friendly fiends...happy smiles

Dialated eyes and whimsical lines

All an track to no where in our minds

On the floor of Apartment 1b.

Remeber the Sex and all its demise

With fierce words....supressed cries

False love and lustful eyes

Around a whirlpool of self-taught lies

In the back room of Apartment 1b.

Recall the stories each one of us told

Of broken homes.....loneliness

Dreams of gold and the broken hearts of many

And the lies of the greatest Liars I have known

That echo in the walls of Apartment 1b.


REMEBER IT.....We lived it.....we breathed it....IT MADE US!!!






Copyright © Perky ... [ 2006-03-27 19:59:36]
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Re: Apartment 1B (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 08:22:28 PM AEST
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I love how you always bring the poem back to "apartment 1b", you gave this apartment meaning and a sense of "personality". Great poem, and I can totally understand where you're coming from

ALINA


Re: Apartment 1B (User Rating: 1 )
by Jane_Doe on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 08:34:11 PM AEST
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I feel like I could really sense you emotions in this one. Very moving words with such a strong meaning. Lovely write.


Re: Apartment 1B (User Rating: 1 )
by Serendippitty on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 10:41:20 PM AEST
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this is awesome... i love it


Re: Apartment 1B (User Rating: 1 )
by NoLessons on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 10:49:37 PM AEST
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Powerful


Re: Apartment 1B (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 02:33:56 AM AEST
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flooded with images


Re: Apartment 1B (User Rating: 1 )
by Aeris030388 on Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 06:06:06 AM AEST
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Thought provoking.


Re: Apartment 1B (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiffyo4 on Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 01:11:02 PM AEST
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very nice write

Tiff




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