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She dances out in the rain as lightening strikes
She looks up to the sky and lets the small droplets flow over her face
As she holds her hands up to the sky and prays a prayer to her God.
She prays for him to take her up to heaven
To get her away from this place
As the rain stops, she goes back to her basement,
Cold and alone.
Curled up on the coach with a blanket, she cries
Scared like a small child in a storm
Just wanting her mom to come and hold her
Like when she was little and the lights would go out.
Instead, she sits alone, dripping wet.
She thinks about her life and cant help but cry.
She hates herself for what she does
And for the control it has over her.
On the coach she sits staring into space
Going to her own little world again
She becomes a different person, a person she doesn’t like
Holding that awful companion in her hand
It’s a curse that has moved into her life
Taking it over more and more everyday
All she wants is to have someone there with her.
Just to sit there and hold her
She hates being alone.
She doesn’t want to be alone anymore.
Or scared, she’s so scared
She knows it will always be there
Lurking, ready to pounce on her when she least expects it
And she knows she will give in to it, she always does.
One day it will overcome her
And all the pain in this life will finally be over
Her prayers will finally be coming true,
She will be in heaven with God like she always wanted.
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dancing in the rain

Contributed by brokengirl on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 11:56:04 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

All alone with the thoughts in her head
She dances out in the rain as lightening strikes
She looks up to the sky and lets the small droplets flow over her face
As she holds her hands up to the sky and prays a prayer to her God.
She prays for him to take her up to heaven
To get her away from this place
As the rain stops, she goes back to her basement,
Cold and alone.
Curled up on the coach with a blanket, she cries
Scared like a small child in a storm
Just wanting her mom to come and hold her
Like when she was little and the lights would go out.
Instead, she sits alone, dripping wet.
She thinks about her life and cant help but cry.
She hates herself for what she does
And for the control it has over her.
On the coach she sits staring into space
Going to her own little world again
She becomes a different person, a person she doesn’t like
Holding that awful companion in her hand
It’s a curse that has moved into her life
Taking it over more and more everyday
All she wants is to have someone there with her.
Just to sit there and hold her
She hates being alone.
She doesn’t want to be alone anymore.
Or scared, she’s so scared
She knows it will always be there
Lurking, ready to pounce on her when she least expects it
And she knows she will give in to it, she always does.
One day it will overcome her
And all the pain in this life will finally be over
Her prayers will finally be coming true,
She will be in heaven with God like she always wanted.

Copyright Â© brokengirl ... [ 2006-03-27 23:56:04]
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Re: dancing in the rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Adelle on Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 12:55:47 AM AEST
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TEARS FALL HEAVILY FROM MY EYES- MY SISTER FEELS THE SAME WAY- AND I WANT TO HELP HER OUT- BUT DONT KNOW HOW- IF THERE IS ONE MESSAGE I CAN GIVE, YOU ARE AMAZING AND UNHAPPILY YOU DONT HAVE TO LIVE- THINK OF THE MANY GREAT THINGS YOU CAN ACCOMPLISH IF YOU GIVE UP YOUR MISERY? AND FORGIVE ALL THOSE BAD THINGS THAT HAVE HAPPENED TO YOU? YOU COULD BE SO HAPPY-
SHANNA

Re: dancing in the rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 06:59:46 PM AEST
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Maybe the rain is so healing because it hides the tears so well. This hurt to read, you put so much pain into it. Do take care, believe me, better days will come. They have to.
David

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